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What Am I?

I am the conveyor of the mysteries of the universe

The embodiment of every desire and whim

I am clothing for thought

Weapon for anger

Vehicle for love

I am

I was

I will ever be

There is none like me

Without me

There is no life

No creation

No Redemption

I am

What you desire to possess

To undress

To express

WHO YOU ARE!!!

Eileen Manassian Ghali

I am the conveyor of the mysteries of the universe The embodiment of every desire and whim I am clothing for thought Weapon for anger Vehicle for love I am I was I will ever be There is none like me Without me There is no life No creation No Redemption I am What you desire to possess To undress To express WHO YOU ARE!!! For PD's Contest What Am I March 11, 2014

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/3/2015 7:34:00 AM

It is good to read this reminder!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/3/2015 8:19:00 AM

It's so good to have you reread this, Richard. You are a dear and true friend. hugs.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/29/2014 9:35:00 AM

It appears the answer is Jesus. Congratulations on your win. I missed you yesterday.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/19/2014 8:23:00 PM

Awesome write and win Eileen! Hugs

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/16/2014 5:30:00 AM

Congratulations on the fine win. Wonderfully penned poem on Who Am I , eileen

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/16/2014 5:44:00 AM

Thanks ever so much, Dr Ram. Kind of you to visit.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/15/2014 8:39:00 PM

lovely Eileen congrats on win hugs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/16/2014 5:45:00 AM

Hey, Shadow. Thanks for this lovely visit. Hugs

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2014 6:36:00 PM

Hi Eileen, congrats for the good placing :) // paul

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/16/2014 5:45:00 AM

Thank you, kindly. Much appreciated.

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2014 2:10:00 PM

Hi Eileen.... , Congratulations, in the "What AM I" contest... love ~SKAT~

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thanks, Skat...Glad to have your visit.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2014 1:04:00 PM

Hello Sweet Eileen, this was awesome... , CONGRATULATIONS!! Sending you a big hug, I had so much fun reading every entry. I have a blog "What did you say about me???" Hopefully, you stop by when you have time, and reveal the answer. Tell US here or on my blog. WAHT! WHAT! And WHO YOU ARE? Always and Forever ~LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/15/2014 2:15:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, PD. :) I'm glad you liked my poem. I revealed all on your blog. Lovely contest....hugs

Richard D Seal

Date: 3/12/2014 7:08:00 PM

Easy peasy my little Desert Orchid and I won't let the cat out the bag, that'll teach it lol take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/16/2014 5:46:00 AM

Glad you keep it in the bag, my dear Mr Seal. Wouldn't want to spoil the fun. Thanks for the visit.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/12/2014 4:10:00 AM

Good morning Eileen. I read this poem last night but left my comment till this morning....after another good look at it! It flows, easily, strongly expressive in its simple choice of words. And who am I? I am the follower...free to choose...but not free to abuse...free to love...but to please not to hurt...free to give...but not only to receive......// a 7 rating // good luck // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 3/12/2014 2:27:00 PM

Yes, I know what it is, and that is because I'm getting to know and understand you, and what fills you with so much passion :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 2:11:00 PM

WOW...Thanks, Paul. I like the poem you have in your post! :) That is absolutely lovely....My poem is very simple...I'm sure you know the answer....It's what I am in love with and passionate about. Thanks for wishing me luck! :)

Skat A

Date: 3/12/2014 1:16:00 AM

you are everything. ..love it.... Skat

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 2:13:00 PM

HOW SWEET SKAT!!! Hugs

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/11/2014 4:56:00 PM

great entry for the contest, eileen! good luck...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/12/2014 2:12:00 PM

Thanks, sweetie! I sure could use some luck on the contest scene! ;)

Jack Horne

Date: 3/11/2014 3:55:00 PM

love this intriguing write - will have to go away and ponder on the answer...

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2014 4:58:00 PM

Welcome, Jack! So good to have you here! :)

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/11/2014 10:40:00 AM

i think i gotcha!!! ...this is soooo good, Eileen!!! ..you're a brilliant poet... keep shining ,my dear! =).gl on the contest ^__^

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2014 1:51:00 PM

Thanks Aiyah! WOW! Aren't you pretty!!! Lovely avatar, my dear!!! Thanks for passing by. Will be to see you soon! hugs!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/11/2014 9:20:00 AM

You have me mesmorized, who are you? God, the Universe, ideas, imagination, words? The possibilities are innumerable.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2014 1:52:00 PM

I'm in your list, Richard...I'm right there...In your list....Maybe a combination...Hmmmm...John 1:1 should give you a clue!

Jared Pickett

Date: 3/11/2014 8:31:00 AM

Very good!! I like the rhythm of this unique poem. "Personification", hmmm, one I have yet to try out!! Oh, that new form you created is nice and I would like to attempt it!! I am a form Nazi and love a new challenge. It seems to me that it it similar to the Swap Quatrain. I will be back to visit again soon!!Asavvy1

Jared Pickett
Date: 3/11/2014 2:04:00 PM

I have read and understand, give me 24 hours I will have it posted!! I will drop you a line so that you can read it! My comments are from heart and REAL, always. Judging by what I have read so far you have yet to be tickled..;-)Thank you for visiting my work, look forward to more!!Asavvy1

Eileen Manassian
Date: 3/11/2014 1:54:00 PM

REALLY???? Honest to goodness???? I was going to give up on that form. A form Nazi...wow! I do like form as well. Yes, it is similar to the Swap Quatrain, except there is an extra line tagged on...which is a combination of different lines in each stanza....AND there is a reversal in the theme of the poem..Much like a diamante...start with this, finish with that. WOW!! I'm so touched! Please let me know when you do!