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What a Ride...Revised

Riding this roller coaster we call life.... Exhilarating highs, plunging to the depths... Sometimes just coasting along with the wind in out faces.... Our tickets bought and paid for by our ancestors.. Some rides we choose and some are chosen for us.... At the end of the day we have memories... Of our days...on a roller coaster...........

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Date: 8/24/2010 5:42:00 PM
Wonderful write on the roller coaster we call life!~Tirzah~
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Date: 8/22/2010 12:55:00 PM
Now I will comment on this one. Very nice writing. Enjoyed the ride. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/22/2010 12:54:00 PM
I tried to answer your rules poem but could not find a validation box so will do it here. Good job. congratulations.
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Date: 8/22/2010 6:05:00 AM
That is life in a nutshell...wonderful write and to the point...always Michael
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Date: 8/22/2010 4:33:00 AM
You have aptly described life..Sara
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