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What A Pity

The horizon bleeds ruby-red, above which a marigold moon ascends with regal splendor. Her pockmarked face aglow; She slowly rises like a Chinese lantern. Dusk descends like a ghostly specter, falling ever so softly, inking silhouettes. Ebony shadows in the night merge into one; a collage of darkening shades of black. The cosmos hidden behind blinding city lights, is lost in its totality! Yet the heavens twinkle as trillions of glittering stars tethered to reality, morph into fantasy. The universe is breathtakingly mind-blowing, inspiring artists and poets alike. And yet, many living in today's cities have never seen the stars, they're like phantom lights that exist in a movie or a book. What a pity!

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Date: 4/29/2018 10:47:00 PM
Emile, congratulations on your placement.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/30/2018 10:09:00 AM
Thanks Eve , I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2018 2:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I live in the middle of no where and the night is exactly as you describe. I'm in awe if your flowing picture perfect imagery.
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Date: 4/28/2018 9:59:00 PM
Thanks so much Susan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2018 1:53:00 PM
Well done, Emile. Congrats on your winning poem.
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Date: 4/28/2018 2:11:00 PM
Thanks Line, I can always count on your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/28/2018 12:49:00 PM
Emile, I am never surprised to see you on the winners list. You have such a way with words, such a true gift. Thank you for your book, I am still reading it and very much enjoying it! thank you and congratulations on your placement. ;)-luloo Reply
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/28/2018 2:10:00 PM
Thanks so much Laura, I am honored my friend, Emile.
Date: 4/26/2018 9:38:00 AM
Such beautiful imagery, Emile The universe is wondrous as is your poem xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 4/26/2018 9:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Mike, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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