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What a Difference a Day Makes

sun hidden the sky about to cry what a difference a day makes time keeps moving by our grass has turned to yellow leaves, disappearing in the breeze fingers, jingle with the dew drops crushed, roads ruined with too much ease remembering, missed laughs in the mist that April morn, feelings torn coming, going, smiles showing your face, that place, love was born but now the willows bend, with no end whispers quiet and splinters speak lost that song, the will to be strong falling softly in the meadow, so weak hidden now the sun I'm about to cry what a difference a day makes with angels in the sky

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Date: 11/11/2017 12:41:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful! Perfectly tragic and poetic. Lovely rhythm and flow! Love!
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:31:00 PM
Tim this is a fav, other than it resonates with me, this is one very well written poem. Good music too.
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Date: 11/8/2017 8:09:00 PM
Hey Tim, how's you? :) still writing beautifully I see. I love it, it's absolutely beautiful!
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Date: 11/8/2017 6:43:00 PM
Wow Tim this is sooo good....Seren
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:39:00 PM
Sometimes you outdo yourself — which I think would be hard to do! Triple Wowsas!!! ~ j
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:23:00 PM
Tim, oh gosh your poem is just beautiful !
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:03:00 PM
This IS a gem my friend! I really enjoyed reading this magnificent poem of malevolent Winter coming, blowing in through Autumn, and colliding with the sadness of the time! I feel the sorrow within this poem, but there is hope for the Spring to come around again, isn't there? What a grand piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/8/2017 1:30:00 PM
ohh, poignant feel allover, tim... this is a gem!..huggs
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Date: 11/8/2017 10:28:00 AM
A beautifully written poem Tim and so true what a difference a day can make. Keep up the great writing :)
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