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Tom Turkey has been defrocked Cleaned, basted and stuffed Surrounded by pumpkin pie Green bean casserole Tart cranberry sauce Come, Pilgrim, Eat!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Augustus Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 6:27 PM
Awesome! Love the floe and this can definitely make you hungry. Congratulations on this lovely meal as well as your first place finish!
Dufresne Avatar
November 16, 2010 at 5:25 PM
hey this one is really cool. Well done including the word set up. Love it, Diane. nYou've done a wonderful job with it.
Chappell Avatar
November 6, 2010 at 6:35 AM
thank you for sharing your excellent write duncan
Neels Avatar
November 5, 2010 at 10:00 AM
Diane where is mine? Hehe Congratulations on your win, hope you will have a great weekend ;) Wilma
Keogh Jr. Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 7:41 PM
Witty first line. It paints a Rockwell picture. Thanks for your kind remarks. THe polls were wrong last night. REid slipped through. But Murray may not. Brown wins in CA, but pot vote goes up in smoke by a wide margin, so go figure the polls, eh!?
Culverhouse Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 12:06 PM
enjoyed this again... I about ready for the old turkey and pie.
Guzzi Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Nice one! (I could hearJohn Waynes voice!)Congrad's. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
October 25, 2010 at 9:18 AM
Congratulations Diane on your 1st Place win in Barbara's contest. Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Many congratulations Diane on your win in Barbara's contest >> James :)
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 9:14 PM
Well, how nice you entered this one when you did. It came in at its well deserved TOP place! congratulations. LUv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 8:34 PM
A beautiful write. Many congratulations for this super win.
Devonshire Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 9:56 AM
Big congrats for taking the top spot, Diane! Way to go. I couldn't write in this form if my life depended on it, but this was a clever and fun approach. Love, Carolyn
Roberts Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 9:38 AM
love it, congrats on your first place win
Cwiak Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Congrats on your win in the contests with this edible treat, Diane. Dan C
Richards Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 7:38 AM
Congratulations on your win, Diane! Hooray for you! Well done! ~ Carrie
Johnson Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 7:33 AM
You did this so beautifully. Congratulations on your big no. one. Love, Joyce
La France Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 6:50 AM
Congratulations on first place, wonderful poem~
Sweetheart Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Congrats Diane on your first place win in BG's contest with this delightful menu feast luv..
Kendrick Avatar
October 23, 2010 at 4:49 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Gorelick Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 11:08 PM
Congrats on a big 1st in my contest. I loved your poem because it set the fall scene..please soup mail me your address so I can get your surpise in the mail..BG
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October 21, 2010 at 10:57 AM
This has made me very hungry again and I just finished lunch!! lol Turkey and the trimmings is my favorite meal. I enjoyed reading and best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your nice comments. Love Scarlett
Dietrich Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:35 PM
wow, you did thanksgiving proud!! I would HATE to be judging this contest!!! YOur last lines are really good too.
Horsman Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:12 AM
I've read quite a few of these contest entries. they are all very good, hope someone thinks about placing all these in to a poem/Cooking Recipe book. it would be a smash. Harry
Anish Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 2:53 PM
Makes me long for another Thanksgiving. I remeber the Thanksgiving of my childhood and you Eplaervu stirred up those memoires once more. Fine work! Peace & blessinsgs Matthew Anish
Sweetheart Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 1:08 PM
Great poem and entry for the contest Diane.. a lovely menu reminding us all of that first Thanksgiving feast luv.. good luck in BG's contest ...
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