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Weary In Love

She looked at her love lines On her open palms And ran her hand over her heart The lines passed through her eye And added a small stitch To hold her heart together But in that fateful moment The stitch dropped and quickly unravelled Loosening ties to her beating heart The pieces crumbled into soft, dust That slowly settled into her weary bones She studied her soft features with furrowed eyebrows, catching Every detail in the palm of her hands The palm lines darker now Connected to her heart in bands! 24.11.2021 Sponsor Constance La France Contest Name: W

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Date: 11/30/2021 8:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely write/win. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day with your win...............
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Date: 11/29/2021 2:06:00 PM
Carol, congratulations on your Second Place in my "W" New Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Carol Mitra
Date: 12/7/2021 1:59:00 AM
Thanks you so much Constance, so sorry to respond late as I have been busy shifting....much love stay well :)
Date: 11/26/2021 8:51:00 PM
A moving, expressive poem Carol. The metaphorical impact of lines from hands to heart is inspired poetry indeed. Congratulations on such a fine, poignant write. Best wishes, Brian
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Carol Mitra
Date: 12/7/2021 1:57:00 AM
Thank you Brian.....so sorry to respond late as I was busy shifting house....I am so glad you liked it :)

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