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Weary and Tired Premiere Contest Winner

Cold the winter night as snow fell, it drifted- collected on streets; where a meandering lost girl struggled to walk, weary and tired; she ran away when it was warm, when she had some money. Now- had no shelter or money, the wild frigid wind blew and blew; when she could no longer walk she lay down in snow, weary and tired; down she sank into the soft snow, a man knelt beside her. He picked her up in his strong arms, she woke up with a warm blanket; he gave her food, a bath and nice clothes to put on, weary and tired; she just followed his instructions, how to give a massage. The massage parlor was a front, it was really a bawdy house; a brothel- she felt tarnished and stained forever, weary and tired; the things she did were disgusting, often had a black eye. He gave her some drugs by needle, so she would be like a zombie; she lay down on the dirty floor and closed her eyes, weary and tired; the police raided in a sweep, found her dead on the floor. They closed the place down, busted all, the doors were padlocked- was shutdown; the police never identified the dead girl, weary and tired; was buried in an unmarked grave, just another lost girl. _______________________ February 12, 2021 Poetry/Verse/Weary and Tired Copyright Protected, ID 02-1328-100-12 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, They Closed The Brothel sponsor, Kai Michael Newmann, Judged 03/05/2021 First Place

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Date: 3/5/2021 7:22:00 PM
Another top write, Constance, that captures the exploitative complexity of brothel life and the often tragic after math. Big congratulations! Brian
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:07:00 AM
Brian, thank you for the visit to my poem, the comment and congratulations - Constance
Date: 3/5/2021 1:03:00 PM
Heya Constance, top winner and so deserving, very moving and stark write, nothing left to the imagination, and quite rightly so, cheers David
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:08:00 AM
David, thank you for the compliment and the comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/5/2021 10:01:00 AM
- ... like a zombie ...weary and tired ... yes, I think so too, Constance - Congratulations on your first place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/6/2021 7:09:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for the comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 3/5/2021 7:19:00 AM
This is brilliant - Congrats dear Constance! Such a sad and harrowing tale but so believable. Love it. God bless you sweet lady. Love to you, Gina
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:03:00 AM
Gina, thanks for the compliment, the congrats and the comment, appreciate _Constance
Date: 3/5/2021 7:15:00 AM
Very moving and tragic write Constance. Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:04:00 AM
Linda, thanks for the comment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 3/5/2021 4:48:00 AM
A tragic tale, real, to which deadened conscience turns a blind eye. Congrats on your top win
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:04:00 AM
Seeker, thank you for the comment and the congrats, grateful _Constance
Date: 3/5/2021 3:58:00 AM
Congrats Constance! very touching and so very real as to what happens in the world!!
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Date: 3/5/2021 9:05:00 AM
Krish, thanks for the congrats and the comment, appreciate _Constance

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