We Were Two

memories are the sweetest recompense when faced with imminent death ~ by poet

We were two for forty amative years.
I turned toward you for comfort and strength. 
You came to me with your deepest dark fears.
We lifted each other and talked at length. 

Each doted on the other with respect.
Our distinct differences made us whole.
The other’s support we came to expect.
Each other’s success was our greatest goal.

As successive years grew long and longer,
the wrinkles showing as we became old,
the bond between us grew strong and stronger.
Subsequent aging grew tougher, more bold.

Then Old Man Death in his black raiment came.
He proceeded to do what must be done.
My shattered life will never be the same.
We were two – woefully, now we are one.*


* HEY beautiful PS poets/poetesses. The greatest compliment to me as a poetess is that I can evoke such caring, emotional comments from colleagues. I have received so many soulful, prayerful thoughts and caring condolences about this poem, I would feel dishonest if I did not report that this is entirely a work of FICTION. My humble thanks to you all. With love, Linda

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Date: 8/5/2022 7:02:00 AM
Linda, congratulations on your win in my contest with your emotional Quatrain, I love your quote, blessings ~~ Constance
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/5/2022 7:38:00 AM
Oh so many thanks Constance! I am honored with this win and appreciate your sponsorship. The quote a favorite of mine. :) Linda
Date: 8/2/2022 12:57:00 PM
Linda, you have let us walk with you in the chambers of your heart when "two now one." You have so eloquently expressed the journey of a married couple to the end. My heart grieves with you. Sending you prayers of comfort! Congratulations on your win!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/5/2022 7:36:00 AM
Dearest Sam. I posted a "disclaimer" about this poem. I am flattered that I bring such emotion out with my poems. In this instance, it is purely a work of fiction. Thank you for caring...Linda
Date: 8/1/2022 3:20:00 PM
Hi Linda, such a talented write...draws the reader intimately into the sweet journey of conjoined hearts only to (inevitably) be smashed against the rocks...awesome poetry! to mine faves....jim
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/1/2022 3:26:00 PM
Hi James. I am so grateful for your visit and fav! Thanks for sharing such nice words, Linda
Date: 8/1/2022 12:15:00 PM
Hey beautiful PS poets/poetesses. The greatest compliment to me as a poetess is that I can evoke such caring, emotional comments from colleagues. I have received so many soulful thoughts and condolences about this poem, I would feel dishonest if I did not report that this is entirely a work of FICTION. My humble thanks to you all. With love, Linda
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Date: 8/1/2022 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/sad write. So very sorry. Love your ending. Priceless.... Have a great/blessed day................
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/1/2022 12:00:00 PM
Hi Paula. Many thanks for your kind words. Linda
Date: 8/1/2022 10:30:00 AM
Sad to read this Linda... such an emotional write... As Valsa said below, the last line says it all... Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/1/2022 11:59:00 AM
Many thanks Ani.
Date: 8/1/2022 10:20:00 AM
Very sad Linda, though the poem is also a wonderful tribute to your late husband. Congratulations on your placement in Constance’s contest… Belle
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 8/1/2022 11:58:00 AM
Thank you Belle. Linda
Date: 7/13/2022 7:13:00 AM
Linda, I have walked in your shoes. Only my husband passed at forty years of age. I am glad you had many years together. Best of luck on a perfect poem Love, Panagiota xxx
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/13/2022 8:41:00 AM
Ah my friend Pangie. Thank you for the stop by and taking time to read. :) Linda
Date: 7/12/2022 11:54:00 PM
What a wonderful ode to a horrible tragedy; sad to hear it but what a lovely way to tell the tale!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/13/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Caren. Appreciate your visits and positive comments. Linda
Date: 7/12/2022 9:16:00 PM
Painful for me to read. Your powers of persuasion and creation are certainly potent, Linda.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/13/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you for kind, encouraging comments gw. laf
Date: 7/11/2022 8:34:00 PM
"We were two....woefully, now we are one". "This is the anti climax. Though death has snatched off one from the other, perhaps not a day passes without thoughts of the one gone ahead. So in thoughts and love, both of you are one. A poem of loss, longing and love.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/1/2022 3:20:00 PM
Good comment Valsa
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/12/2022 4:48:00 AM
Hi Valsa. Thanks so much for visiting and for the kind and insightful comments. Linda
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