We Walk Alone

The night kissed the fading day With a whisper: "I am death, your mother, From me you will get new birth."  by Rabindranath Tagore

                            

                             we do not ponder about death
                          until life progresses towards twilight ... 
                  we start reflecting on mortality and death.
                  many questions arise, float through our mind -  
            all religions have different interpretations of where we go...
                          we try to figure out the ultimate truth.  

                               is life only a series of dreams? 
                a dream which ends, and we become part of the cosmos?
                          are those stars glistening in the dark, 
                          showering blessings, my loved ones? 
                          what is the point of amassing wealth, 
                          when we leave, we leave bare-handed.   

                     death can be sublime, death can be painful. 
                         we fall in love, we build relationships, 
                                 but In Death, we walk alone. 
 
                                    wheel of life never stops .. 
                                   a river reaches the ocean  
                           meandering through plains and valleys.  
                          trees flower, seasons change, leaves fall.  
                                         Life's journey ends.

                                  Love exists with its splendour,
                                            Compassion, 
                                             Kindness,
                                        Honesty, Dreams …
                               tender Moments linger for infinity, 
                                Death fails to erase life’s legacy. 


                                          February 22, 2022
                      For "F-form -Free Verse - New- Poetry Contest
                                             Theme: Death
                                   Sponsor: Constance La France
                                            SECOND PLACE

                               Brian Strand Informel Poetry Contest
                                              FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/21/2022 10:09:00 AM
Death is the ending we must face alone. Your poem is lovely and true, Mala. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/14/2022 7:38:00 PM
"Death fails to erase life’s legacy" - True. And we walk alone. Very great work. Congratulations!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/15/2022 5:52:00 AM
Dear Christuraj, Thank you for commenting on this poem - I lost my brother a few months ago...this theme is often appearing in my mind.
Date: 2/26/2022 9:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful story/write. Love your line, "is life only a series of dreams?" Have a great/blessed day..................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/15/2022 5:50:00 AM
Thanks, Paula. Really appreciate your thoughtful comment.
Date: 2/26/2022 12:10:00 AM
Wow Mala! You have outdone yourself on this exquisite breathtaking beauty. Straight into my Faves! I love this poem so much. It is definitely First Place for me. Congratulations on your second placement. Blessings xxoo
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/15/2022 5:49:00 AM
Thanks, Connie. After I lost my brother a few months before, this theme is appearing in my mind and in my writings often. To your faves? I am so honoured, Connie.
Date: 2/25/2022 2:43:00 PM
Mala, congratulations on your Second Place win in my Free Verse contest with your wonderful poem, I love the quote too ~ Constance
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/15/2022 5:47:00 AM
Thanks, Constance. I am honoured.
Date: 2/25/2022 8:14:00 AM
When life roars around us in our youth, we hardly think of death ! But as the twilight years approach we brood more often about the inescapable reality of facing the monster all alone ! Friends or relatives cannot come to aid us. In death we walk alone ! A beautiful and meaningful write, Mala !
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Date: 3/15/2022 5:46:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa. Your comments are so thoughtful, inspire me. Really appreciate your kindness - feel honoured.
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