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We Stand By Valentine's Shores - Valentine's Collection - 2020

Beloved, we stand by Valentine's shores, 
we are as gentle as a turtle dove, 
our dreams ever open up Heaven’s doors.

Together we do share a precious love, 
as we both do lie by the starlight stream, 
our love does raise us to Heaven above.

We shall ever lie beneath starlight gleam, 
where our hearts shall take flight and peaceful soar, 
we ever find ourselves in starlight dream.

We shall ever stand by Valentine's shore, 
as we stand together in the divine, 
you shall ever be the one I adore.

Divinity sings as Luna does shine, 
You are now my eternal Valentine.

Copyright © Vladislav Raven | Year Posted 2022

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Bill Baker Date: 8/10/2022 6:44:00 AM Definately a FAV for me, Mike. Beautifully written Terza Rima. A form I haven't tried yet, but think I'd really enjoy. The love poem of your eternal valentine is touching and feel real to me. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us my friend. Bill Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 8/14/2022 11:05:00 AM Hi Bill, thank you for dropping by, the comment and the fave, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. In dreams, the love can seem so real, my muse, forever giving me inspiration. I think she ever will. I write very rarely in the Terza Rima form. I should try using it more. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hour Friend ..... Mike.

Michael Tor Date: 7/30/2022 11:38:00 AM Mike your romantic spirit is brought back to life with this excellent Terza Rima. Nicely done my friend. Enjoyed reading and thank you for posting... Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/30/2022 3:09:00 PM Hi Michael, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I always like adding to this series. I love the Terza Rima form, it can be so beautiful. The Valentine's Shore lies deep in my heart. Have a wonderful evening. your friend ..... Mike.

Panagiota Romios Date: 7/29/2022 10:05:00 AM What a delicious love poem, Mike! I do like all the lines, you talent, you! Panagiota xxx Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/30/2022 12:42:00 PM Hi Panagiota, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Valentine's shores lie deep within the heart, always standing in the fore of my mind. Valentines ever sing in tyhe soul. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/28/2022 11:59:00 AM Valentine's shore has such a romantic ring to it. COOL! Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/28/2022 3:07:00 PM Hi Andrea, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The Valentine's shore does always stand at the fore of my mind. I think it stands at the heart of my soul. Still finding such joy in the writing of love. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Valsa George Date: 7/27/2022 9:59:00 PM A passionate song of love for your dear Valentine ! The tone is so soothing and the emotions expressed, so intense ! Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/28/2022 2:28:00 PM Hi Valsa, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I am glad you find the write soothing. I always try to write these pieces with a gentle flow. The emotions sing from a gentle heart. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 7/27/2022 5:43:00 PM I want to find that starlight dream - sounds peaceful! Nice write, Linda Login to Reply Vladislav Raven Date: 7/28/2022 1:49:00 PM Hi Linda, thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. The starlight dream lies deep within the soul. It comes when called from the heart. Have a wonderful evening. Hugs always ..... Mike. XX