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We Shall Entwine One Day Soon

simple words echo the fortress the wind whispers of a longing cry a tear falls in your absence an agony pleads, as I cry out to an empty sky your soft spoken words run through the thoughts of my yesterday your beautiful song of truth, a loving heart so pure and true It was how you spoke that you would never go away all the stories you told of a love made for two..... in my mind, I see your smile,a hope for each new day I thank the good Lord above in celebration for the days spent with you simple words, I pray..... thank you my Lord for the comfort you have provided this day when each day was cloudy and covered in grey you brought the warmth of her love by my side to forever stay The wind whispers a peaceful song down a lush forest path, I walk along.........

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/23/2010 7:30:00 AM
Rick, I love how you put such meaning in such few words, who are your mentors? I'm glad I joined this sight if for no reason than to be closer to your writings.
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Date: 8/22/2010 10:44:00 PM
Copngratulations on your win with these tender words. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/18/2010 4:46:00 PM
Rick, A quickie Doctor Phobia contest has been posted. Got two entries and won't be putting a blog up on it until tomorrow. Hope you can send some laughs my way. I am trying to reduce stress about the doctor appointment I have on Monday. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/15/2010 10:42:00 AM
My congratulations to you ^Rick on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Elegy". Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations Rick on your most worthy win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 8/14/2010 1:10:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your winning poem in Dr. Ram's contest with this beautiful piece of poetry.. so touching and so true.. enjoy another momentous victory my friend..with luv..
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Date: 8/14/2010 6:45:00 AM
Congrats for the 8th placement in my contest, Rick
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Date: 8/11/2010 2:39:00 PM
Meant to say " I am going out to Mr. Sun. " good grief, I cannot even type correctly these days!!
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Date: 8/11/2010 2:38:00 PM
I really like this, Rick. It is so soft and reflectively beautiful. I am guessing it was the elegy and I missed out on that contest. DANG it. So now I got out to Mr.Sun, where I will work on whatever contest idea impresses me most (I see at least 4 or 5 I have not tried yet). Hey, just look down my list and you will see right away my sign! For the Zodiac race contest! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 8/11/2010 1:48:00 PM
Most expressive and impressive creativity Rick.. good luck in Dr. Ram's excellent contest with your superb entry..with luv..
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Date: 8/11/2010 9:49:00 AM
What wonderful poetry I am reading today and so diverse. I have not read a bad poem yet today. I am enjoying reading each and everyone from old poets and new poets alike. Lots of amazing contest entries also. Thank you for sharing yours with us today ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/11/2010 8:27:00 AM
When a loved one dies, we often find it difficult to forgive them for leaving us. But I like the way you express thankfulness for the time you shared together. The last two lines are so lovely and filled with emotion and imagery. Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest, Rick. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:28:00 PM
Thanks for supporting my contest, Rick
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:27:00 PM
Smile ~ "Absolutely Beautiful My Friend; Like Flowing Sparkling Waters of Love, Gently Making Their Way Down Along Paths Of Eternities Stream" ~ "Much Love & Warmth to You & Yours Always," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Night My Friend;" Bye!:) ~
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Date: 8/10/2010 9:15:00 PM
nice one,, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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