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We First Met

Can you remember the first day we met, Years ago when I young A chance meeting I will never forget Can you remember the first day we met, We went swimming and got all wet You got mad and stuck out your tongue Can you remember the first day we met, years ago when I young. Date Written:12/29/2022 Honorable Mention Chance Poetry Contest Sponsored by:Julia Ward

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Julia Ward

Date: 1/15/2023 3:23:00 AM

Very good!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2023 6:49:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win on your contest. Thanks for having it. Glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing it for your contest. Have a blessed day writing away............

W J Clarke

Date: 1/15/2023 2:12:00 AM

A lovely touching memory of youth triolet. Congratulations Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2023 6:46:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win with this write. Glad you like my write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Have a blessed day writing away............

Ann Peck

Date: 1/14/2023 3:04:00 PM

Ah, Paula--So sweet and lovely. Congrats on your win!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/15/2023 6:44:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win with this write. Glad you thought it was sweet/lovely. Have a blessed day writing away............

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/14/2023 6:25:00 AM

So sweet of you…Simple yet full of heart. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2023 1:08:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win with this write. Glad you like it. Have a blessed day writing away............

Terry Miller

Date: 1/14/2023 6:01:00 AM

Great triolet, congratulations

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2023 1:04:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win with my write "We First Met." Glad you like this Triolet. Have a blessed day writing away............

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2023 1:02:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win with my write "We First Met." It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away............

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/14/2023 4:29:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/14/2023 1:04:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for you congratulations. I am honored to have this win with my write "We First Met." It was fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away............

Heidi Sands

Date: 1/1/2023 7:37:00 AM

Great one Paula. Fun. Happy New Year ! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2023 8:44:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this fun write. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Valsa George

Date: 12/31/2022 8:42:00 PM

Memories come tumbling down. Those young days of romance had much thrill !

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2023 8:43:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Seems like only yesterday. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/30/2022 10:23:00 PM

This is fun! I can remember those days!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2023 8:41:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Where did all the time go??? Seems like only yesterday. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/30/2022 9:00:00 PM

A sweet and nostalgic poem, with its memories of youth. Blessings.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2023 8:40:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this nostalgic write. Where does the time go??? Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/30/2022 8:17:00 PM

So cute… You got mad and stuck out your tongue. Happy New Year, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2023 8:38:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this cute write. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Stephan McBride

Date: 12/30/2022 4:19:00 PM

Sounds like very fun joyful time, love it

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/1/2023 8:37:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you love my write. It was a fun/joyful time. Have A Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Panagiota Romios

Date: 12/30/2022 4:04:00 PM

Hi Paula, You take me back to my past))) in this great triolet. Best wishes Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 1:50:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my Triolet write. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/30/2022 2:00:00 PM

Beautifully reminiscing in memories--enjoyed the write, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 1:48:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you enjoyed this fun write. Yes, reminiscing in memories. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 12/30/2022 12:20:00 PM

A fine romantic memories poem, lovely and recalling the sentimental moments. Kudos! *****>>>>><<<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>> Wishing you a very happy new year, take care..

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 1:46:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my write. Yes, many memories. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/30/2022 3:26:00 AM

Sometimes chance smiles on us. Happy New Year.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 1:44:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. You are so right. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/29/2022 9:19:00 PM

A chance meeting that talks of many joys together, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 1:43:00 PM

Thank You, for your note. This chance meeting should have never happen. Guess God knows best. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/29/2022 4:07:00 PM

Beautifully penned Triolet, Paula. Creative, you conveyed a wonderful summer scene with your first lover. Best wishes for the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/31/2022 1:41:00 PM

Thank You, for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my write. Happy New Year 2023 With Blessings....................