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Way Back Then When I Was Ten

I was shot by Cupid's tainted dart And puppy love awakened my sleeping heart Tried to impress with exaggerated tales Mark the box letters sent through the mail Hunted and fished for sport and food Baseball games with the neighborhood crew Dirt always flying from old gravel roads Wearing my brother's, hand me down clothes Baseball cards popping bicycle spokes Stealing the babysitter's pack of smokes Riding my bike to the nearest creek Stripping off my clothes to the water I'd streak Change from my Sunday suit after church Running around in just shorts with no shirt Family meals three times a day Each time we'd all bow our heads and pray Lied about it all with two crossed fingers Dad finding out meant a real humdinger Turn around and do it all over again Way back then when I was ten by Daniel Turner Jan 29, 2016

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Date: 2/18/2016 10:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with this well-written trip back in time. I thoroughly enjoyed it!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/18/2016 11:18:00 AM
Hello Susan. Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate you spending your valuable time to read and comment. Peace my dear:)
Date: 2/17/2016 9:16:00 AM
Daniel, congratulations on your podium win with your reminiscent childhood poem! Nicely done. Sandra
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Sandra Haight
Date: 2/17/2016 9:42:00 AM
I am a Leo too! Have a peaceful and blessed day too. Sandra
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2016 9:19:00 AM
Thank you my dear, I am a Leo. I love to talk about myself.(LOL) I have learned a lot since those days. I appreciate the kudos and have a blessed day. Peace:)
Date: 2/17/2016 7:36:00 AM
naughty you, daniel.. great write and big congrats!..huggs
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2016 9:11:00 AM
Thank you, Nette, I appreciate the pat on the back. I've learned a lot since those days!
Date: 2/17/2016 5:41:00 AM
Why you were a little Rebel! me too...a very nice tale of your childhood, Danny. Congratulations on this one!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2016 5:49:00 AM
I think my mother used to call me a rapscallion.ha. Thank you my dear and peace.
Date: 2/16/2016 11:10:00 PM
Nostalgia at its best! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/17/2016 5:48:00 AM
Thank you, Janice. Peace
Date: 2/16/2016 8:23:00 PM
We sure got into our fair share of trouble when we were ten. I think all kids did and had fun doing it!... Congrats on a win with this wonderful poem! Thanks for entering, Daniel :)
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/16/2016 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Kelli. I really enjoyed looking back to those fun times. They made me the person I am today.
Date: 2/2/2016 8:17:00 AM
Great visual through written words!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 2/2/2016 8:20:00 AM
Happy memories, so long ago. Thank you for your support.
Date: 1/30/2016 10:37:00 PM
Seems you and I are almost rebel twins. I was a rowdy rebel at a very young age myself. Adding this one to my fav list as it brings back memories that I greatly treasure..A7
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 10:39:00 PM
Yes, I was telling someone earlier after reading theirs that we are all so similar but yet so unique. Southern rural life was fun and a very sheltered slow life. Thanks again for dropping by.
Date: 1/30/2016 5:42:00 AM
Awesome, I love it when my family sits around during the holidays and tells reminiscent confessions of "Way Back When" That's the good stuff!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 5:49:00 AM
It used to be nice. My brother and dad are gone, my mother is 82 and blind and my sister doesn't talk to me. It's just me. But life is life it could be worse. Thanks for the flowers.
Date: 1/29/2016 11:27:00 PM
Dear Daniel, You bring back such treasured memories for me. Thank you so much for making my day.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/30/2016 4:38:00 AM
Thank you Elaine. Yes they are truly treasured memories are they not. Bless you.
Date: 1/29/2016 8:41:00 PM
I LOVE how you did this challenge. Yes, this is exactly how wonderful it was to be ten!! By the way, THANKS for getting the Hateful 8 allusion in my poem. One person wrote to me, "So who was the eighth one?" hahaha
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Daniel Turner
Date: 1/29/2016 8:55:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. Yes the movie should have been a lot better.

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