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Wave Upon Wave

White cotton fields erupting bits and pieces left in trail flickers of light mirrored along side liquid beads slipping off slopes aromas eclipsing scars in my mind drowning in lavender swirls of summer Wave upon wave upon wave splashed down in desire biding my time just waiting to feed your fire Soft sounds of Beth echo in the background and I know washed up the silent moments are going to gloriously come to an intertwined end

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/22/2017 10:32:00 AM
That's a great poem, so lovely!
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Date: 7/22/2017 8:22:00 AM
Hello Tim!! A wondrously beautiful free verse here. The way in which you always use your imagery in poems certainly entices and enchants the reader to read more and more. Wave Upon Wave for sure!! A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 7/22/2017 8:09:00 AM
Wow Tim! This one is an incredibly beautiful poem :)
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Date: 7/21/2017 3:35:00 PM
oh, the time has been whist by just a short time , until another time for romance... ~*
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Date: 7/21/2017 2:00:00 PM
a fine teaser scented by waves of sultry summer tim..huggs
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Date: 7/21/2017 3:56:00 AM
the poem made me think of a handsome cave man - on a surfboard surfing with other fit people
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Date: 7/20/2017 10:07:00 PM
Oh, Tim Tam Man, with is wonderful poetry, mate
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Date: 7/20/2017 8:22:00 PM
You like KISS? I do too. lol Just a memory? Or reality? I like the second verse the best." Aromas...summer" Love the poem.
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Date: 7/20/2017 3:56:00 PM
You are just on wave upon wave of romantic here dearest Tim :) it sure is a great feeling... I love it :)
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