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Waterfall of Shadows Premiere Contest Winner

I watch as sun slides down in the sky. The shadows increase in length, a dark waterfall descending upon the sandy beach. Slowly I inhale and exhale, savoring the fresh flavor of the evening’s briny sea. My eyes devour swirls of lavender wisteria beautifying the vast expanse of the darkening cobalt sky. My sweet summer has slipped away with the setting of the sun on this autumnal equinox day. The waterfall of shadows is now a fountain totally engulfing the shore, having evolved into night’s giant all-consuming chrysalis enwrapping me body and soul. A sudden rush of wind and small ripples on the water transform into turbulent waves lashing the shoreline where I stand. I tug my sweater closer to my chest as I tremble in the gloaming.

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Date: 12/30/2023 11:34:00 PM
Your free verse is in top form here. The imagery of shadows growing, wisteria dissolving into darkness, warmth turning to chill all reinforce the end of summer at the Equinox. Beautifully worded with poignancy but not over the top, a tricky balance mastered by few. A delightful read and a Fav.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/31/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, John. It's nice to see you at one of my poems. Hope you find more time to write. I miss you here.
Date: 10/19/2023 12:03:00 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea! Interesting title!
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Date: 10/16/2023 7:49:00 AM
A touching piece Andrea. Beautifully descriptive and great use of words and phrases.
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Date: 10/13/2023 9:42:00 AM
Well, now I know I am losing it! I was sure I left a comment for you on this poem that highlights your creativity and marvelous use of images! This is truly a poetic gem. Congratulations on your first place win, your POTD and being in the top 10 of the new poems. A marvelous write, indeed. Blessings of autumn joy to you! A fav for me.
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Date: 10/13/2023 12:05:00 AM
Hello Andrea a lovely poem, late congratulations on winning first place! Have a great day!
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Date: 10/12/2023 8:23:00 PM
It’s good to see you’re still winning. I don’t write much anymore but I still know what a good one looks like.
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Date: 10/12/2023 6:02:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful poem. I especially lie the lines, "A waterfall of shadows/is now a fountain". Congratulations in making the top 100.
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Date: 9/29/2023 5:06:00 AM
Back to say congrats on winning first place!
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Date: 9/26/2023 6:00:00 PM
Certainly deserving of a win. I especially liked the last 2 lines in each stanza of your poem. My favorite one, "having evolved into night's giant all-consuming chrysalis, enwrapping me body and soul" Such beautiful metaphors throughout. It painted pictures for me of environments that I love to be in. I am delighted to have found your peaceful, fragrant, picturesque, dreamy poem :)
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Date: 9/26/2023 2:57:00 AM
Double congratulations on POTD and trophy win, Andrea:)
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win and your POTD, Andrea! So very creative with a lovely metaphor. I can feel the coming darkness and smell the scent of the ocean. Blessings!
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:12:00 AM
I told you you would, congratulations
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Date: 9/25/2023 5:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d., Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 9/24/2023 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem receiving the award of POTD. Sush excellent verses my good friend. A fav .. God bless you.
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:26:00 AM
Huge congratulations on receiving POTD, Dear Andrea. What a beautiful poem with exquisite imageries! Love ~
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Date: 9/24/2023 12:01:00 AM
Wonderful writing. I just adore this one. God bless you sweet friend. Congrats on POTD - and on the top win in the Shadows contest. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Andrea. Your imagery is eloquent, and the movement and rhythm were magnificent. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/23/2023 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved .
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:49:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Andrea, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:49:00 PM
This is the first day of Autumn, and that means, "Summer has slipped away." Seasons are like the wind, softly felt and then, gone in the blink of an eye. You paint such vivid images with your words, Andrea. This is beautiful with a bit of melancholy, all at the same time. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 PM
Oh Andrea what a beautiful write congrats on potd. One of your best!
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:34:00 PM
O, that sudden rush of wind! Congrats on POTD, Andrea! ~ Trembling, gw
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:27:00 PM
Andrea, simply beautiful and congrats on potd.
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Date: 9/23/2023 5:08:00 PM
excellent in Andrea! many congrats on potd:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2023 4:56:00 PM
Impressive imagery in your poem. I can appreciate your line 'my sweet summer has slipped away.' I had twinges of sadness about it just the other day...when fall finally arrived. I'm not a winter person at all...prefer warmth and sunshine. Cold seems to cut me to the bone. Anyway I thoroughly enjoy your creation. Congrats on POTD
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