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POTD 9/23/2025

Premiere Contest WinnerWaterfall of Shadows

I watch
as sun slides down in the sky.
The shadows increase in length,
a dark waterfall descending 
upon the sandy beach.
Slowly I inhale and exhale,
savoring the fresh flavor 
of the evening’s briny sea.

My eyes devour 
swirls of lavender wisteria
beautifying the vast expanse
of the darkening cobalt sky.
My sweet summer 
has slipped away 
with the setting of the sun
on this autumnal equinox day.

The waterfall of shadows
is now a fountain 
totally engulfing the shore,
having evolved into 
night’s giant all-consuming chrysalis
enwrapping me body and soul.

A sudden rush of wind 
and small ripples on the water
transform into turbulent waves
lashing the shoreline where I stand.
I tug my sweater closer to my chest
as I tremble in the gloaming.
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Date: 8/25/2025 7:36:00 PM
What a beautiful poem! You wrote this while I was absence so I'm glad for this opportunity to read it. Surely you have become more comfortable writing free verse? Congratulations, Rea, I'm so apleasa ... CayCay
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Date: 8/24/2025 10:05:00 AM
Dear Andrea, it is my pleasure to return and re-read this exceptional poem once again. So poignant so beautiful. Congratulations for your continued success in Mark's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/22/2025 11:07:00 PM
Hi Andrea, a lovely beach scene. Watching sunset by the side of a sea is a joyful experience. But when summer passes from our life and as shadows fall, it is painful. Congratulations on your great win.
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Date: 8/22/2025 1:27:00 PM
Andrea, your beautiful poem brought to mind every beach we’ve had the privilege of experiencing from the East coast to the west coast, and from Mexico to islands of the Caribbean. A Fav poem for me. Congratulations on your top 10 win on Mile 9 of my 2025 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on, because Mile 10 has already started.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/22/2025 3:41:00 PM
Thanks, Mark. I love beaches.
Date: 12/30/2023 11:34:00 PM
Your free verse is in top form here. The imagery of shadows growing, wisteria dissolving into darkness, warmth turning to chill all reinforce the end of summer at the Equinox. Beautifully worded with poignancy but not over the top, a tricky balance mastered by few. A delightful read and a Fav.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 12/31/2023 12:29:00 PM
Thanks, John. It's nice to see you at one of my poems. Hope you find more time to write. I miss you here.
Date: 10/19/2023 12:03:00 PM
Very nicely penned Andrea! Interesting title!
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Date: 10/16/2023 7:49:00 AM
A touching piece Andrea. Beautifully descriptive and great use of words and phrases.
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Date: 10/13/2023 9:42:00 AM
Well, now I know I am losing it! I was sure I left a comment for you on this poem that highlights your creativity and marvelous use of images! This is truly a poetic gem. Congratulations on your first place win, your POTD and being in the top 10 of the new poems. A marvelous write, indeed. Blessings of autumn joy to you! A fav for me.
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Date: 10/13/2023 12:05:00 AM
Hello Andrea a lovely poem, late congratulations on winning first place! Have a great day!
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Date: 10/12/2023 8:23:00 PM
It’s good to see you’re still winning. I don’t write much anymore but I still know what a good one looks like.
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Date: 10/12/2023 6:02:00 PM
Andrea, beautiful poem. I especially lie the lines, "A waterfall of shadows/is now a fountain". Congratulations in making the top 100.
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Date: 9/29/2023 5:06:00 AM
Back to say congrats on winning first place!
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Date: 9/26/2023 6:00:00 PM
Certainly deserving of a win. I especially liked the last 2 lines in each stanza of your poem. My favorite one, "having evolved into night's giant all-consuming chrysalis, enwrapping me body and soul" Such beautiful metaphors throughout. It painted pictures for me of environments that I love to be in. I am delighted to have found your peaceful, fragrant, picturesque, dreamy poem :)
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Date: 9/26/2023 2:57:00 AM
Double congratulations on POTD and trophy win, Andrea:)
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Date: 9/25/2023 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your trophy win and your POTD, Andrea! So very creative with a lovely metaphor. I can feel the coming darkness and smell the scent of the ocean. Blessings!
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Date: 9/25/2023 6:12:00 AM
I told you you would, congratulations
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Date: 9/25/2023 5:56:00 AM
- Congratulations on your well-deserved p.o.t.d., Andrea :) - hugs
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Date: 9/24/2023 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautiful poem receiving the award of POTD. Sush excellent verses my good friend. A fav .. God bless you.
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Date: 9/24/2023 6:26:00 AM
Huge congratulations on receiving POTD, Dear Andrea. What a beautiful poem with exquisite imageries! Love ~
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Date: 9/24/2023 12:01:00 AM
Wonderful writing. I just adore this one. God bless you sweet friend. Congrats on POTD - and on the top win in the Shadows contest. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/23/2023 10:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your POTD, Andrea. Your imagery is eloquent, and the movement and rhythm were magnificent. Enjoy your special day of recognition, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 9/23/2023 8:36:00 PM
Congratulations on POTD! Well deserved .
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Date: 9/23/2023 7:49:00 PM
Beautiful poetry Andrea, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:49:00 PM
This is the first day of Autumn, and that means, "Summer has slipped away." Seasons are like the wind, softly felt and then, gone in the blink of an eye. You paint such vivid images with your words, Andrea. This is beautiful with a bit of melancholy, all at the same time. Congratulations, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/23/2023 6:36:00 PM
Oh Andrea what a beautiful write congrats on potd. One of your best!
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