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Waterdrops For Sweet Eileen

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I have no sage advice; no words can bring solace to such losses. Knowing the darkness that can surround someone, instead of wise words, I offer to you this poem, because it says I share your sadness, and I wrap my arms around you with hugs.

Water Drops Waterdrops Falling from the sky Waterdrops falling from my eyes Tumbling down, in sorrow’s depth I drown If only my waterdrops Could water your heart I would drown you with happiness Giving life a new start Are waterdrops not the seeds of hope? In the darkness for years I too did grope If only my waterdrops Could whisper the right words Waterdrops Washing over the worlds woes Rainbows hidden in depressions throes I fall to my knees, in a terrible fright Waterdrops have conquered This shining black knight For how can I save the damsel in distress? The fiercest of demons, has put me to the test Waterdrops on roses Whispering flowers Winds caressing the darkest of rains I am left to pray Longing to see her smile and poetry again

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 5/15/2017 2:22:00 PM

Elieen will like this poem you wrote for her. It beautiful well written. She will appreciate this poem.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/14/2017 7:52:00 PM

Back to see you again :) even though I don't say much....

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 7:56:00 PM

Saying Hello is like a ray of sunshine, Your heart speaks louder than words!!! :) Hugs!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/12/2017 8:16:00 AM

Eileen is not only my dear friend but even my soul sister.I had the honour of meeting her and her wonderful family...She is a beautiful soul...May your poem fills her with happiness and bring to her a smile...I want to hear her roar again....Extremely beautiful poem...A fave for sure.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:30:00 PM

I hope one day to meet her and her family, there is an expression, birds of feather, and you have shown how true this is!!! Hugs!!

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/9/2017 2:36:00 PM

Such tenderness shared Arthur, here's to the hope that brings comfort to sweet Eileen...

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:19:00 PM

I wish comfort to all! thanks Charlie!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2017 12:22:00 PM

In certain cases words are not enough, but in this case your beautiful and comforting words have served their purpose, Arthur. ~ Regards // paul

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:16:00 PM

Thanks Paul, that means a lot, as I tried hard to do just that.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2017 12:46:00 PM

lovely dedication for eileen; you are so compassionate, arthur.. and talking of rain, i know how gusty it is in canada.. but from where i am, the heat is terrible, hence my poems about drizzles, ohh.. thanks, friend for passing by.. huggs

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:16:00 PM

Lets make a trade, I will give you our rain, you give Canada, the heat and you!! :)

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/8/2017 7:37:00 AM

Good Morning Arthur. It was an honor turning to your page this morning. Your words truly exceed the emotive factor. This is wonderful and it appears you have a cherished friendship with Eileen. Your words are poetry in every way. Well done in its entirety. Enjoy the morning and day.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:15:00 PM

Thank you, I do not know Eileen well, I only know she is a kind soul whose poetry is honest, romantic, raw and it speaks to me! :)

Darren White

Date: 5/7/2017 12:32:00 AM

This is beautiful, and so very relatable. I only wish if we could share that pain, that we could somehow diminish it. I like the wish that tears would fall on fertile soil, and grow happiness there. And Eileen, if it is in any way possible, I would do as Art does, and cry my tears as seeds of hope into your heart. And create the most beautiful rainbow, together with him.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:13:00 PM

You have a heart of Gold Darren, you really do!

Darren White
Date: 5/9/2017 12:22:00 PM

You heart is not empty, you may think it is, but that's not true, my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/7/2017 12:24:00 AM

Such a sweet and beautiful poem for Eileen. Tailor made for her because of how beautiful it is, Arthur.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:12:00 PM

Yes as are you!

Carol B.

Date: 5/6/2017 5:17:00 PM

You possess a heart of gold!! Beautiful :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:11:00 PM

Or coal

Eve Roper

Date: 5/6/2017 4:43:00 PM

this is beautiful ~*

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so much Eve!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/6/2017 11:39:00 AM

Coming back with more words of thanks, dear. How good to know that you can not only sympathize but empathize with me. Bless you for it. I will treasure this gift always.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/14/2017 8:11:00 PM

If I can give you a smile, even a small one, even for a small moment, is enough, for you have brought smiles to so many!!

Sara Ella

Date: 5/4/2017 9:38:00 PM

Your heart shines in your words, Art <3 Hugs to you too!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2017 11:07:00 PM

Thank you so much Sara! :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 5/4/2017 3:33:00 PM

Arthur, what a beautiful heartfelt poem you penned. It touched my heart deeply. Eileen my deepest condolence, you will be in my prayers tonight. God bless...Hugs :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2017 11:06:00 PM

So very kind of you Akkina! thank you

Chris Green

Date: 5/4/2017 6:12:00 AM

Beautiful and heart touching Arthur. You have shown your heart in this wonderful poem.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2017 11:06:00 PM

I may very well have no heart, however I know in my emptiness Eileen has a huge heart as do all of you for your kind words!

Lin Lane

Date: 5/4/2017 5:42:00 AM

Your poem hugs and comforts Eileen through these tender words, Arthur, and have touched all who've read them. Eileen, you have many friends here who feel your anguish. Know that you are loved.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2017 11:05:00 PM

That's so kind of you Lin, I am touched by the comments and hope she reads each and every one!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/4/2017 3:33:00 AM

Aww what beautiful compassionate lines for our lovely Eileen, I can see she is very touched by your words. I still have not grieved for my father - it may come one day:-( Hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2017 11:03:00 PM

Sadness is like rain, it will come :(

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/4/2017 12:07:00 AM

Arthur, you have reached out to me and have brought solace. Bless you, my dear friend...You have been a knight, indeed. :) I have my good days and my bad days....knowing I have friends like you here....that helps me cope. I have no words of thanks because it wouldn't be enough to express my depth of gratitude. I'll just send a heartfelt hug. God bless you, dear one.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2017 9:43:00 PM

You have no idea the smiles and joy you bring others, not my words the words of many others, I am happy I could make you smile! Hugs