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Water & Ice

like blue tentacles
natures spinal chord of life
provides for us all


Written for Raul's Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 10:42:00 PM

Michael, a wonderful haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Jay Loveless

Date: 5/14/2010 11:35:00 AM

Awesome write (:

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/13/2010 5:19:00 PM

Interesting approach to the picture...Good luck in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara

Date: 4/28/2010 1:30:00 PM

Michael, missed you here at The Soup. Hope you will be back soon. Your talent shines in this one. Glad that it was one of the winners. Take care and God bless. Karen

Constance La France

Date: 4/23/2010 12:42:00 PM

Hey, Michael, how are you doing, have not heard from you in awhile. I was looking at the contests I entered and noticed there is one your sponsored, and it made me think, where is Michael, anyways, looking forward to reading more of your poetry soon, and hearing from you.. I really like this one you wrote for one of Raul's contest.. love constance

Date: 4/10/2010 12:58:00 PM

Missed you at The Soup. Hope you will be returning soon. Karen

Elaine George

Date: 4/7/2010 6:10:00 AM

Sensational Haiku, dear Michael. A winner for sure! Love, Lainie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/6/2010 10:55:00 AM

Intresting and a nice one.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2010 12:54:00 PM

very nice, Michael. I see it as all the river systems of the world! LUv, Andrea

James Foulk

Date: 3/29/2010 1:53:00 PM

michael really loved this Haiku. thank you for your support. and how has things been?

Brian Strand

Date: 3/24/2010 12:47:00 AM

Michael thanks for your much valued encouraging words today.Best wishes with your writing and your other projects.Rgds Brian

Date: 3/23/2010 1:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest with this one. Nice use of imagery. Just can't keep up with all the contests. Liked this poem the first time I read it. Keep up the good writing. Karen

Skat A

Date: 3/23/2010 6:22:00 AM

Great 2 see in the winner circle...Enjoyed the read

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:04:00 PM

Congratulations Michael, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 3/5/2010 6:44:00 AM

Congrats on the well-deserved win! Beautifully written

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:41:00 PM

Very nice, Michael. congratulations to you!

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 9:50:00 AM

A nice # 8 Michael. Congratulations, Agape, Moses

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:41:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Marty Owens

Date: 3/3/2010 7:39:00 PM

Congratulations on your win,,,enjoyed....Marty

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:10:00 PM

Congrats to you Michael on your win in this contest!

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, MJ! Enjoy your win! Peace, Audrey

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations on being in the winner's circle in Raul's contest Michael. Cascade is one of the only French words I know, which means "Waterfall" of course. Blessings, Connie