Watching You Watching Me Revised

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Watching me watching you-revised Once upon a time You were here with me We were two of us We were side by side Wished upon a star I will ask God To hold you tight, Give you a kiss for me, at night Reflections Your spirit I can see, you my brother Twin 6/24/22 dedicated to Elvis Aron Presley and his twin brother Jesse Garon Presley

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Bill Baker

Date: 7/6/2022 7:15:00 AM

One of the most engaging voices I've ever heard. Thanks for the memories you've brought to my mind. Hugs, Bill

I Am Anaya
Date: 7/12/2022 1:39:00 PM

I saw the movie and was compelled to post something for Elvis! Thank you, Bill hugs

Robert Gorelick

Date: 6/28/2022 1:17:00 PM

An exciting, lavish portrayal of Elvis and other rock n roll idols of the time in addition to giving credit to gospel music for being an important foundation for rock n roll. Elvis The Pelvis

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/28/2022 2:21:00 PM

...Voodoo vibes—obscene dance moves—rock n roll—brilliance!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/25/2022 1:23:00 AM

Is Elvis your brother?

I Am Anaya
Date: 6/25/2022 1:53:00 PM

Hi Victor, I am too young, still in my prime! Lol...I just saw the new Elvis movie, loved it.