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Washington's Wailing Wall

Notes and flowers are left by the wall Symbols of grief for soldiers who fell Countless names, Vietnam Veterans In hearts of those living spirits dwell An older woman holds a child's hand Points to a name and lays a small wreath "I wish your grandfather had known you, He was just twenty; his life so brief "Your mother never met him either Though his marrow might have saved her life Your Uncle Aaron had his blue eyes Losing him too added to my strife "Aaron's name can't be found on this wall Perhaps another wall will be built To honor our fallen in the Mideast And relieve the war makers' guilt" * Ekphrasis on the Vietnam Veterans Memorial, a wall constructed in Washington, DC

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/24/2010 10:41:00 PM
LNC..my friend of huge talent. its on my bucket list to see the wall before I "move on".. Congrats yet again. Bg
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Date: 4/22/2010 5:24:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carolyn. I was touched by your poem and it is so sad to lose our soldiers in the beginning of their lives. I was so happy to see this one in the winner's circle. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 4/22/2010 12:28:00 AM
Nice poem, thank you for choosing The Wall- Congrats on your win Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2010 11:54:00 AM
Carolyn, many congratulations on your win in Brian's wonderful contest. One day i would like to visit one of these walls of the lost >> James
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Date: 4/20/2010 9:14:00 AM
A most worthy display, this veterans memorial, Congratulations on your worthy poem's success Carolyn. Agape, Moses
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Date: 4/20/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations!! I know a winner when I see one, Carolyn! And first read..I knew this was...Enjoy...Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:40:00 AM
A moving poem, Carolyn...and such a moving, and heart breaking place it is. Congratulations on this sensitive win! Well done! love, Carrie
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Date: 4/20/2010 7:09:00 AM
Congrats Carolyn on your HM in Brian's contest.. a wonderful honor to add to your growing portfolio of poetry ..luv.. Linda-Marie
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:56:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Carolyn.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/17/2010 10:49:00 AM
Excellent idea for the contest, Carolyn! I enjoyed. luv, andrea
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Date: 4/17/2010 8:46:00 AM
My husband and his brothers were apart of vietnam, we were lucky to see them come home. Thank you for this poem you should have no problem winning the contest.
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:53:00 AM
Great topic that is descriptive and emotive..We who have not experienced the loss can in no way know how the loss affected the family...Good luck in the contest..Should be in the winner's circle..Sara
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Date: 4/16/2010 5:00:00 PM
I visited that wall, Carolyn. And looked up a few names of soldiers that I once knew before they were shipped to Viet Nam. Thank God, they were NOT on that wall. Answered prayers. Loved this poem. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/16/2010 4:18:00 PM
Thankxxx Carolyn for a wonderful contest and a great challenge on the songs of Simon and Garfunkel .. appreciate u choosing "Rocky Romance" as one of your winners ... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:36:00 PM
Deep and touching dear..I love reading you .. Charma
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Date: 4/16/2010 1:03:00 PM
Another wonderful poem from your gifted pen for Brian's contest... good luck again and a beautiful tribute to their memory..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/16/2010 10:01:00 AM
Sorrow caresses this heartfelt poem Carolyn, good luck in Brian's contest >> James
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Date: 4/16/2010 9:15:00 AM
Yes! As the kids say, "That's what I'm talking about"! The best I've read so far, Carolyn! I don't think I'll attempt this...just like the Ghazal..this can be challenging. I've got enough on my plate, already...Love, Audrey
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Date: 4/16/2010 8:38:00 AM
very nice good luck in the contest faleshia
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