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War Then Death of a Brother

Four years ago today my brother Tony May passed away A bullet in his head 51 years ago as he lay on his death bed When we were young we played Army yet little did he know This game would become real haunting his soul He went to war innocent and came back as a zombie Walking around as if he were already dead with a bullet in the head The sights and smells of war one can only imagine Killing another who you have never met because of war Images never forgotten sight’s never to see again With memories you cannot forget all because of a war Eighteen years old selling his soul to the Devil for a war On this day I honor you my brother for you were like no other I miss you My Big Brother Contest: Deep (001) Sponsored by: Poet Destroyer A Date Created: 02/24/2019

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Date: 11/1/2020 11:29:00 PM
The sacrifice of war is real, and hits home with a write like this. So sorry for your loss. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Date: 10/8/2020 8:34:00 AM
A really moving poem. Sorry for your loss. Congratulations on your win. :-)
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Date: 10/8/2020 12:48:00 AM
So heartbreaking Bobby, Im sorry for the loss of your brother. Congrats on your win. Tom
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:12:00 PM
Great write, Bobby, in Linda's contest. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/7/2020 9:01:00 PM
A heartbraking story, Bobby. A tribute of honor for your beloved brother. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/13/2019 7:43:00 AM
This is heart breaking Bobby. Sorry for your loss. Thankfully Canada did not participate in the war. I feel bad for young men who for love of country sacrificed so much and then were vilified when they returned home. Thanks for directing me to your tribute.
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Date: 2/24/2019 3:27:00 PM
oh my gosh, this is SO sad, Bobby. One of the most poignant poems I have seen here recently.FAVE
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Date: 2/24/2019 11:31:00 AM
Deeply sad, Bobby. Thank you for honoring him, and showing us what war does.
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Date: 2/24/2019 10:03:00 AM
So sad Bobby, sorry for your loss...
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