Wandering, Not Lost

The past sneers at me
Breaking open bottled up memories-
Of years of aimless wanderings,
Of days spent in unbridled passion,
The smell of cigarettes, ganja and beer
Wine and women, bet and gambling,
And the thrill of having won and lost !

Like the prodigal son, walked away from home,
Leaving behind kith and kin 
Rambled through the murky corridors of life,
In search of pleasure, riches and fame

Once when I walked with stilted gait
Surrounded by friends and fans,
Amid laughter and haste
Eager to please and to praise,
Never, I knew this wouldn’t last!

Inebriated and effervescent were we
Went to ball and ballets
Fancied money could buy all we yearned
And turn this Earth-a virtual Paradise

But how swift was the twist of fate!
With no condiments,
Life suddenly turned bland.
The gorgeous castles I once built,
Burnt down to cinders like dry leaves	
Blown away by the wind
Friends, I thought never would desert,
Flitted away one by one! 

Now I discern, I am alone
With none to hold my hand
Or share the burden
With just my mournful shadow
Tottering along to keep me company

Having descried the truth
I should no more battle with dark shadows
Or get lost in the labyrinthine paths
I must get out into the light
I shall retrace my steps, back I will go
Embrace the safety of my home
And leave my heartache and sobs behind

Oh, I am not lost as my eyes are now open! 

Placed Second
Pick- A –Title Vol.27 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Edward Ibeh
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Ibeh Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 10:08 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Valsa:-) Your poem is just splendid all the way through! Would've been at no.1 spot had you added poem date at the bottom.
Alex Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 9:49 PM
"The past sneers at me" - Great beginning. The whole poem is beautifully written. Congratulations!
Wolf Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 5:11 PM
You hooked me with that very first line, Valsa, i.e, 'The past sneers at me.' Excellent narrative penned here. :) gw
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:34 PM
Was your past something abominable? Can't believe... Lol! However your present is glossy ! Thank you for your humorous response.
Poet Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 8:13 PM
When I read this gem of poetry, Valsa, it immediately conjures up the importance of learning from past mistakes and charting a course for the future. Great job.
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:32 PM
Unless we learn from past mistakes we will ever be prodigal sons. So thankful to you Lasaad for your wonderful comment !
Awtry Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 5:37 PM
The story of the prodigal explored with poetic detail. So many beautiful lines. "The gorgeous castles I once built, Burnt down to cinders like dry leaves"--a poem all its own. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us :) ~ps
George Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Thanks a lot sweet friend for your detailed analysis and appraisal of my poem.
Leffanta Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 10:39 AM
One can never go home again (it only exists in the mind), and friends are almost always fair-weather, but one can always learn from personal experiences, so enjoy the journey! Aloha!
George Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 3:11 AM
Yes, friends are mainly fair weather, especially for those who think that money alone matters. Thank you Rico :) :)
Pandit Avatar
December 13, 2021 at 5:31 AM
Years of aimless wanderings set the tone of this write evoking memories for many who can relate. Life is all about learning from the past. Your poem gives voice to those who have been there, Valsa.
George Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Yes, at least a few can relate... as long as there are prodigal sons . Those who learn from the past never stay long in the fallen state. Thank you dear friend for your wise observations.
Buhagiar Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 10:46 PM
The story of the prodigal son will always be popular. A good lesson one can write a book about it. Money has no value where friendship is concerned. Only a Father's love can redeem his evil ways. Lovely rendition of the parable. I was hoked to it right through.
George Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 2:51 AM
Money will come and go... ! But home and familial ties will ever be there to help one in need. Thanks a lot Victor for your beautiful comment !
Horsman Avatar
December 12, 2021 at 9:59 PM
Learning from the past, the way for the future, this is what comes to mind, reading this gem, Valsa, amazing poetry.
George Avatar
December 14, 2021 at 2:49 AM
Yes, learning from past mistakes opens the way for a better life. Thanks a lot.... harry! Much obliged for your great comment.
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