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Ireland, National Park, Connemara, Hiking, Away

Wandering, Not Lost

"Not all who wander are lost " Quote by _J.R.R. Tolkien I am a rolling stone adrift, my life like a flowing river; the journey a labyrinthine maze that I tread. Wandering, not lost, and I am but a trembling flame; just a speck on the wheel of time. Mom's kitchen like a holy place, where memories come as a dream; and I hold the pain of many deaths in my mind. Wandering, not lost, and winds wail like violins; and I still drink from the blue sky. Strength and courage are my clothing, the ultimate prize will be peace; the long way sinuous as I travel unanchored. Wandering, not lost, afloat in a deep cobalt sea; I crash to shore on white waves. I have found my serenity, in the misty veiled haze of life; steamy as a terrarium the graves stone cold. Wandering, not lost, clouds above like gauzy curtains; I walk into the setting sun. ___________________ December 7, 2021 Poetry/Verse/Wandering, not lost Copyright Protected, ID 12-1411-705-07 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Theme Chosen - Wandering, not lost Written for the Standard contest, Pick-A-Title sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 12/31/2021 Second Place
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Ibeh Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 10:13 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest, Constance:-) Your poem is as captivating as the photo you chose!
La France Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Edward, thanks for the inspiration and the contest, and for my fine placement and the congratulations and compliment ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Alex Avatar
December 31, 2021 at 9:51 PM
"I am a rolling stone adrift" - beutiful beginning. "I hold the pain of many deaths in my mind" - Great verses and rich poem as a whole. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
January 2, 2022 at 12:53 PM
Christuraj, thank you for the compliment on my lines and for the congratulations ~ friendship and poetry _Constance
Canerdy Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 6:40 AM
You have used vividly descriptive imagery and metaphors to convey your appealing message, Constance.
La France Avatar
December 11, 2021 at 6:50 AM
Janice, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem, appreciate ~ love and serenity _Constance
Horne Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 7:08 AM
a sure winner here, my friend - i particularly like the last stanza. Thanks for the places in your contests x
La France Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 9:11 AM
Jack, thanks for the encouragement and the compliment, I like that verse too ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Horsman Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 8:37 PM
Wow, Constance it will take on hell of a good poem to beat this in contest, so many wonderful lines here, love it.
La France Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 9:12 AM
Harry, thank you for the amazing compliment, appreciate ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Poteet Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 5:40 PM
Beautifully written, Constance. Your title/repeat line is powerful and the quote from Tolkien supports it well. My thanks to you, for your constant encouragement and support. Appreciate you recent contest series that allowed Old Writes as well as New. Your poem is blessed inspiration as always.
La France Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 9:14 AM
Reason, thanks for the compliment and wonderful comment. I have started a new contest series and hope you will share your poetry ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Mcintosh Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 1:36 PM
Beautifully done... Love it. God bless you sweet lady. Love, Gina
La France Avatar
December 7, 2021 at 1:40 PM
Gina, thank you for the compliment, God bless ~ love and serenity _Constance
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