Wall

I did not want to build as I thought, honestly,
The relationship between us will sure to break;
My brother and I stood, hand in hand, constantly,
With prayer for each other each day we did wake...!

Nuisances, yet, like menaces in Egypt, increased,
His sheep and goats and hen and cocks filled my rooms clean;
My gardens got filled with his beasts wholesomely greased,
I couldn't bear to breathe, though his garden is green...! 

Enough is enough, I said, I built it, lo, hence, 
To see him, yet, I had to look over my wall;
I could have, lo, solved the matter with a fence,
Why did I build a wall? Did I give a peace call...?

Shall I break this wall brother? I humbly asked him,
Make a gate, for now, he said, joy in heart, fill-brim...!!!
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Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 12:02 PM
- Congratulations ... a beautiful poem, Alex :) - hugs
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:28 PM
Thank you so much. May God Bless You!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. Walls/fences can be a good thing. A gate can also be a good thing. I enjoyed your wonderful write. Have a great day.............
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 10:27 PM
Thank you so much. May God Bless You!
Poet Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:58 AM
Chris, your imagery is consistently exceptional. Your writing is impressively crafted, my friend. Congratulations on your outstanding Win.
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 7:17 AM
Thank you so much. May God Bless You!
Sambourne Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 5:55 AM
Estrangement between siblings is a troublesome wall indeed - difficult to break down. Your metaphor of the gate is most apt. Congratulations! Best wishes, Brian
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much. May God Bless You!
Emate Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:24 PM
A beautiful sonnet, Christuraj with an end that proffers a solution.
Alex Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 7:16 AM
Thank you so much. May God Bless You!
Baker Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 11:51 AM
It was a dilemma, Christuraj. The gate solved part of the problem. Nice Sonnet. Have a great week, my friend! Bill
Alex Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 8:09 PM
Thank you so much. May God Bless You!
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