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Walking Through the Meadow

Walking through a meadow Shining with the mornings teardrops Near the babbling brook Spotting a buck Its beautiful brown coat Leaping gracefully over a fence Seeing an albino squirrel White as snow Coming back down Finding a groundhog hole Filled of soft and fuzzy babies Playing with each other Squeaking like baby birds It is getting dark The song birds Singing their final songs A coyote howls off in the distance A bears snore Echoes through a cave Like a giants breath The moonlight settles All is quiet As the meadow falls asleep Now the only sound I here Is my own heartbeat.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/10/2011 4:29:00 PM
Zeke, welcome to the soup.. a wonderful way to impress us with this awesome poem.. a very sweet write.. like the fuzzy baby image.. and enjoyed the ending,,, take care,..Linda
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Date: 8/21/2009 8:52:00 AM
very nice,
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Date: 6/11/2009 2:27:00 PM
nice poem zeke love,shi
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Date: 5/26/2009 12:02:00 PM
Zeke- You make me so proud-Finally, one thing that I am happy to passed onto you. Please don't let this special gift be forgotten, you have real talent. Keep up the great writing, it is one thing that is always good for your soul. Don't ever let it go! I am so proud!! I love you Love Always, Mom
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:43:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Zeke. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/25/2009 3:15:00 PM
Brilliant poem Zeke, it does sound an awesome place to be, James
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Date: 5/23/2009 5:05:00 PM
AHH what a wonderful place you have written about I wish I was there right now. Laura :)
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