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Walking Across the Bridge of Life I Stopped To Peer Over the Edge

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Walking across the bridge of life, I stopped and peered over the fence. Below was what life didn’t offer, It was black and so immense. Oblivion could answer the problems I face, All the troubles of life today, Oblivion could remove every mountainous issue, Packed up, then sent away. All it would take would be a climb and a jump, A few small steps then a slip, Then I’d be free, free as a bird, Free from this life membership. But then I recalled the people I knew, They stood by me when I was depressed. They shared their memories of happy and fun, Even though they too were distressed. Do they really need me? What would each of them think? How would each of them feel? My questions got deep, my answers- profound, My thoughts were a mental surreal. So I looked away from the fence, to the road of life, Those potholes that I had devised, I would jump them with glee, with a smile and a song, I’d simply just compromised.

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Date: 3/15/2016 2:55:00 AM
Great poem that starts in despair and ended in triumphant optimism. Perhaps it is our connection to humanity, family, friends, that pulls us back into the light. We have a choice to be a selfish or selfless. Awesome title and opening lines.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/15/2016 5:44:00 PM
Thank you for this great feedback Tim. Ur right, life is full of what u make of it, and every day, luckily, we have the freedom to choose. Thanks.
Date: 3/9/2016 10:17:00 PM
Lewis, your poem is very powerful, it touched my soul, oh how many times have I wanted to just slip into the darkness, 7
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Date: 3/9/2016 10:31:00 PM
hugs from the world BW. thanks.
Date: 3/9/2016 8:08:00 PM
Life has many trials, but when you have friends and family it helps to make you realize life is worth living. You have written this so well Lewis. When the dark days come, loved ones and faith will help shed a light. Blessings, Connie
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 3/9/2016 8:11:00 PM
Thankyou Connie. :)

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