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Walk Through My Gate

A broken gate in the cemetery holds many memories. By Poet Walk through my gate at night, only with a full moon very bright. The hanging "Gossamer" from the trees is an eerie sight, I do not know if I like this invite. This "Ghostly" night may bring some fright, but in the end we will be alright. Look over there at the the pale light, it is over the "Grave" of the knight. The queen was "Grief-stricken" not showing her delight, only she knew the cruel husband with her insight. This "Godforsaken" place is a great place to ghostwrite, if the "Groaning" does not make one take flight. It is time to go as we close the gate tight, it could use a fresh coat of paint in white.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2025 1:19:00 PM

"2 Place" Walk Through My Gate ~ Date Written: 6/27/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/11/2025 10:50:00 AM

Back with big congrats dear Paula. Don't get scared in that ghostwrite position ;) Congratulations! :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2025 1:18:00 PM

Thanks for stopping back over to read again. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Always good to see you here. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story. I have been off the computer for a few days. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/11/2025 5:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great win in the contest, Paula :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/18/2025 1:17:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Also thanks for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story. I have been off the computer for a few days. Hugs... Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 7/3/2025 2:17:00 PM

Well done and so original, Paula. I am entranced by the thought of the grave of a knight who abused his queen. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/4/2025 8:10:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Also thanks for your, Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story to be, Well done and so original. It was a ton of fun to write but took extra time and thought. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 7/2/2025 1:11:00 PM

Wow, in monorhyme as well! Well done Paula. it certainly is spooky gate! Enjoyed this write of yours. GL! Linda :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2025 1:55:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Also thanks for the WOW and GL. Glad you found my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story to be, Well done. This one took extra time and thought but was a ton of fun to write. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Crystol Woods

Date: 7/1/2025 12:55:00 PM

Wow! A monorhyme, right? That's a lot of "ight" rhymes but you made it make sense! Good job!xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/2/2025 11:23:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you found my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story to be a, Good job. It took extra time and thought but was a ton of fun to write. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/28/2025 4:06:00 PM

Paula, nicely done. Best of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/29/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for stopping over and for your, Best of luck in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story to be, nicely done. It was a ton of fun to write. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Len Gasun

Date: 6/28/2025 3:29:00 AM

Another well-crafted rhyme poem from you my dear poet friend Paula. So delighted to read another creative work of yours this afternoon. So enjoyed. I love it along with the lovely quote. Thanks a lot for sharing. Good luck in the contest. Have a blissful weekend. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 2:20:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for your, Good luck in the contest. Glad you found my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story to be a, well-crafted rhyme poem. So glad you also loved reading this one and my quote. It came to me fast and I wrote it down fast. Then I reworked it some. Hugs... Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Valsa George

Date: 6/27/2025 10:27:00 PM

Without doubt, this invite to enter the cemetery through its gate will cause dread in anyone. Dear Paula, your use of the prompt words are ingeniously done. All the best, dear. Hugs.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 2:15:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for, All the best. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story. Yes, it is an eerie sight and invite. So glad you like the way I used the prompt words. It came to me fast and I wrote it down fast. Then I reworked it some. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/27/2025 5:04:00 PM

Wow you took this challenge so quickly you always come through, Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 2:07:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over and for your, Wow. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story. It just came to me and I wrote it down very fast. Then I reworked it some. Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/27/2025 3:28:00 PM

Hello Paula, i enjoyed the poetry poem story. Hugs. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/29/2025 8:10:00 AM

Hello Paula, oh! A ghost writer in the cemetery, i will keep a lok out fot it. Hugs. /Darlene/

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/28/2025 2:04:00 PM

Thanks for stopping over. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Walk Through My Gate" write/story. It was a ton of fun to write. Hugs... Watch out writing away as a ghostwriter in a cemetery.............

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/27/2025 2:36:00 PM

Walk Through My Gate ~ Date Written: 6/27/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet...

Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2025 7:00:00 AM

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