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Waking Up In Heaven

Death doesn't exist, We never die, We just sleep And awake again In the garden of eden. Who sleeps first And who sleeps last, We all have to sleep One moment in time, But we all wake up again In the place of no sorrow. Our dearest who slept already Will wait for us to sleep, When the time is right, We will sleep and then we will rejoice. My dearest cousin you just passed away today At such a young age, You were ready to sleep and wake up In the land of happiness, You are not with us in flesh anymore But you are in spirit, Dear cousin i know one day We'll meet again, Till then all my love to you .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/8/2023 3:48:00 PM
Charmaine, your poem is truly captivating, filled with exquisite imagery that brings each line to life. Your ability to delve into the depths of emotions is truly remarkable, as you seamlessly transport the reader from a serene beginning to a haunting tale of personal tragedy. The way you intertwine these two contrasting elements is nothing short of awe-inspiring, creating a tapestry of emotions that leaves a profound impact on the reader.
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Date: 11/25/2014 3:48:00 PM
Simply beautiful, what a delight to read!
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Date: 10/20/2014 3:53:00 AM
touching very beautifully penned charmaine god bless dear friend
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Date: 5/24/2014 5:39:00 AM
A very touching expression of heart! Loss is never easy to deal with. I write because this is how I express all of my inner feelings of both loss and gain... Read my poem, "A Tear"... I thank you for letting me touch a part of you and may you touch a part of my heart too! PR
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Date: 7/11/2009 10:48:00 AM
Sad, but such a lovely poem to read Charmaine>>James
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Date: 6/29/2009 6:41:00 AM
so very beautiful our loved ones are wating for our us to come home too, congratulations on your poem being featured God bless you from diane
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Date: 6/29/2009 3:22:00 AM
Charmaine, this is an absolutely beautiful poem. What a wonderful understanding heart you have. Congratulations on your featured poem this week. May you have many more.Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:43:00 AM
You did it again my friend. Congratulations. Mine is also featured this week. od bless. Ernilando
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Date: 6/29/2009 12:05:00 AM
Congrats on your feature poem this week CharmaRgds Brian
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Date: 3/24/2009 5:22:00 PM
Dear Charmaine, Very Beautiful I walked with YOU in this Wonderful Write I agree with the message Iwould not use all capital letters YOU can use them in a way that expresses the movement of the POEM You should read some of my POEMS as I use capitals for emphasis Thank-YOU For YOUR Comment I will read more of YOU soon ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/19/2009 9:54:00 AM
I love how you began the piece then took me to a personal tragedy that the voice in the poem has to deal with..loved how you weaved them together.
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