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Waiting For Spring

ting-ling-ling, and slowly. the wind blows, the sun shines, the cold stays - the day’s song. bare oak bored - stir buds and untold wings! 1/24/2023 Tricube Contest Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Date: 1/31/2023 6:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, Kim - hugs
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Date: 1/30/2023 5:08:00 AM
I dread those oak buds coming to life because of the allergy problems, but it is such a beautiful time of year. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/30/2023 6:05:00 AM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 1/30/2023 2:09:00 AM
Excellent, Kim you showed us all how to write in this new form
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Date: 1/29/2023 9:32:00 PM
Great scene. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/28/2023 9:46:00 AM
Magical … bring on Spring Kim ! I love your use of words and images . Hugs, Susan :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2023 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, Susan! This is a fun form that Sara shared!
Date: 1/26/2023 6:34:00 PM
Best tricube I've read so far, Kim. Really vibrant and vibrating. Spring sings with your lines. Let it be!! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:20:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon! I love the form!
Date: 1/26/2023 2:43:00 PM
Joyful! I can't wait for spring :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:20:00 AM
Soon! Thank you, BJ!
Date: 1/26/2023 10:01:00 AM
Beautiful Kim. Nice to read today :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:21:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/26/2023 7:44:00 AM
I love the lat line, Kim. Enjoyable poem.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:22:00 AM
Thank you, Mike! Spring brings a lively bunch of wings :)
Date: 1/25/2023 5:31:00 AM
Yep, this time of year it gets a bit much -- I miss the Arizona Summer if you can believe that. I can relate. Interesting form.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/27/2023 5:26:00 AM
I’m visiting an Aunt in Arizona in march. Looking forward to it! I love those birds that sound like squeaky toys!
Date: 1/24/2023 10:00:00 PM
Lovely tricube poem. Best for a win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/25/2023 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 1/24/2023 4:50:00 PM
I have a wind chime on my porch and that is exactly how it sounds Wishing you springtime weather~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 9:07:00 PM
Thank you, Michelle!
Date: 1/24/2023 4:34:00 PM
You got me salivating Kim wanting Spring so much...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 4:47:00 PM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Date: 1/24/2023 3:29:00 PM
Can't wait to see the spring back. You did very with this new form. Best wishes for the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2023 4:49:00 PM
It is a fun one! So glad the sponsor, Sara, showed us this form!

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