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Waiting : Stephanie Deshpande Painting Contest

I sit and wait The hands of the clock move slowly forward Already five minutes late What is the delay, maybe the car he borrowed Has broken down, so I sit and wait. He left my Mam and me A new family for him these days Supposedly he must come and see That I am alright, though he doesn’t pay I sit and wait All dressed up as though I care Bathed and dressed in Sunday best Hair washed a ribbon added to give flair I sit and wait again As I have done many times before An hour has passed once more no show I sit and wait How many times is this allowed to go When can I not get ready for my Dad He walked away and broke my heart From now on a new life I will start No more waiting for his time to come Dad’s life, I am no longer a part Mam and I have a new home I sit and wait no more This time he came No longer had I waited I was not at home In his life I no longer participate I sit and wait no more. Penned February 2nd 2014 Inspired by the painting by Stephanie Deshpande - Waiting

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Date: 6/7/2017 8:22:00 AM
Very sad Seren. I cant fathom doing that to a child
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Date: 6/5/2017 9:48:00 AM
This is a heartfelt poem and very well written. Betrayal and disappointment. I wish you the best, Kai
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Date: 2/26/2014 9:41:00 PM
So sorry for this late congrats.. but it does come with some amazing news, news I'm sure an artist, like you, will truly enjoy. Stephanie Despande has provided a link to the winning poems on HER OWN BLOG.http://www.stephaniedeshpande.com/contemporary-free-rhyme-poetry-contest/ Isn't this amazing? Huge Smile from Cyndi
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Date: 2/15/2014 7:50:00 PM
It's horrid I know, my Dad even left the country! for 20 years out of the USA BUT he did come back & for years now we have had a loving relationship again, so do have hope! Congrad's on your win. Light & love
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Date: 2/1/2014 10:33:00 PM
This is a very powerful write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this tremendous poem this evening! You created an outstanding poem by the twist you awesomely made! I loved the way you took the piece! What a delightful verse! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 2/5/2014 8:15:00 PM
Thank you Russell, Glad you liked it ...Seren

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