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"I'm coming, I'm coming, for my head is bending low; I hear those gentle voices calling . . . " Quote, Stephen Collins Foster, 1826-1864 ____________________________ In the hush of night voices come creeping, they shush and lull me with a silent kiss; my dream breathes in the quiet of sleeping. Voices unchain pain 'till I am weeping, silent, I fall in a deep, dark abyss; in the hush of night voices come creeping. I want to speak, to talk at this meeting, to tell my unvoiced love to swirling mist; my dream breathes in the quiet of sleeping. Into my soul the voices come seeping, I am wandering and do not resist; in the hush of night voices come creeping. Wordless as a stone I stand still waiting, and voices soundless make me reminisce; my dream breathes in the quiet of sleeping. I recall each name engraved in writing, each sweet beloved name on that cold stone list; in the hush of night voices come creeping, my dream breathes in the quiet of sleeping. ________________________ December 3, 2018 Poetry/Villanelle/Voices Creeping Copyright Protected, ID 18-1091-675-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Voices . . . sponsor, Silent One First Place

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Date: 12/10/2018 8:33:00 AM
Sun, thank you for visiting my poem with the comment and congratulations, merry Christmas to you too .
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Date: 12/10/2018 12:17:00 AM
- Congratulations on this great winning poem, B.W. ...D.H. :) - At the same time I wish you and your family a peaceful and lovely Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/10/2018 8:32:00 AM
Hugs !!
Date: 12/9/2018 11:45:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, Eve, and Silent, and Funom for visiting my poem with those great comments and congratulations ~
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Date: 12/9/2018 1:39:00 AM
What a wonderful, compelling poem written in perfect villanelle form, my friend. Well deserving of the top win. Congratulations, Dear Heart! Hugs, Carolyn
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Constance La France
Date: 12/9/2018 11:44:00 AM
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Date: 12/8/2018 10:55:00 PM
Enjoyed reading, Dear Heart, a marvelous with great imagery. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 12/9/2018 11:44:00 AM
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Date: 12/8/2018 9:48:00 AM
An excellent Villanelle... You do these so well and they are difficult to do... The emotion in your poem was not hindered by this strict form, a deep poem.. fitting for the theme.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Constance La France
Date: 12/8/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thank you so much for the contest and my awesome placement, appreciate a lot !
Date: 12/7/2018 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful, so beautiful and as always, your pen writes in the language of kings through a naturally flowing ink.
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Date: 12/8/2018 9:53:00 AM
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Date: 12/6/2018 7:04:00 PM
Paul, thank you for visiting my poem with that nice comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/5/2018 12:22:00 PM
I love this poem, Constance, for apart from its meaningful content, I can also relate to it, except for when I wake up and find total silence around me! I need not wish you luck....it's a winner in my eyes! Regards // paul
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Date: 12/6/2018 7:03:00 PM
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Date: 12/4/2018 2:16:00 PM
Sun, thank you for visiting my poem with that great comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 12/3/2018 8:24:00 PM
This is so descriptive. What a fine bit of writing!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/4/2018 2:15:00 PM
Smiling !

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