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I lay in my bed dreaming in the darkness and like a huge serpent memories come creeping and the voices of the dead are demanding, the past covers me like a thick blanket I want to remove it, throw it off, push it away. but I cannot as the dream is too strong the voices too loud a cemetery gate is opening wide . . . and I enter into the hush and the rows of tombs and tombs now the voices are whispering . . . whispering my name and I cannot fight it anymore I fall into a dark void and I am falling, falling, falling into this dark dream . . . the tombs are wrapped in wispy, misty fog and vines caress the names engraved in cold stone I fall to my knees weeping and lamenting then . . . the sun is pouring in my bedroom window ____________________________ October 19, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/Voices Copyright Protected, ID 16-1217-617-0 All Rights Reserve. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to the contest, Strand No 650 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 1/20/2020 3:04:00 PM
Sad, but lovely , Dear Heart, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2020 4:49:00 PM
Eve, thanks for the congratulations, yes sad ~
Date: 1/19/2020 7:17:00 PM
Nightmares can seem so real. A poignant and melancholy poem that is so well expressed Constance. Congratulations on your wonderful First place win! : ) xxoo
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Constance La France
Date: 1/20/2020 9:18:00 AM
Connie, yes even the most beautiful dream can turn nightmarish, thanks for visiting and for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate ~
Date: 1/19/2020 5:51:00 PM
This is really a nice piece - your theme so vividly expressed - tension built skillfully and then realeased in the last line! I did breath a sigh of relief at the end! Congrats, my friend.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/19/2020 6:21:00 PM
Sam, thanks for the lovely comment and the congrats, appreciate !

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