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Growing up,
                                                                 
we never lived near my aunt.
                                         
On trips to my grand-mom's house,
                               
we would visit overnight with my aunt.
                           
Our favorite dishes she would cook all day,
                     
the aroma greeted us as we walked in her door.
               
Hugs and kisses,
                                                           
were flying everywhere.
                                                 
She would always say,
                                                   
look at how much you have grown.
                 
Off to the table we would go,
                                         
talking~laughing~eating until overfilled.
                         
The years went by way too fast,
                                     
with visits getting further apart.
                                     
In the summer as a teen,
                                             
I would sometimes visit for a few weeks at a time.
           
Never wanting to leave,
                                                 
aunt~how I wish you were my mother.
             
When my little one came along,
                                     
I took him for a visit to my aunt's.
                                 
They loved each other just like I did,
                               
he also never wanted to leave.
                                       
Now she is gone,
                                                           
no more loving place to visit.
Date Written: 11/17/2021
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''V'' New or Old Poetry Contest
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Date: 11/30/2021 12:47:00 PM
Many congratulations on a feast to the soul write.... Silpika.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/1/2021 8:06:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like this one. It was fun to write. Have a Blessed Day .......................
Date: 11/29/2021 1:05:00 PM
Paula, congratulations on your First place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest, your poem is beautiful and wonderfully penned ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/30/2021 12:38:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win in your "V" contest. Glad you like what I wrote. You said, "your poem is beautiful and wonderfully penned." WOW!!! You just made my day. "Thanks" Have a Blessed Day .......................
Date: 11/25/2021 4:10:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me thank the Lord for enabling you to inspire others through your writing talent. God bless you.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/25/2021 7:49:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad I inspire you with what I write. Have a Blessed Day .......................
Date: 11/23/2021 7:30:00 PM
A wonderful heartfelt verse of love,Paula. Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Have a great Thanksgiving with family. Hugs Eve
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/25/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have this win. Glad you like my "Visit" write. Have a Blessed Thanksgiving Day with hugs.......................
Date: 11/23/2021 12:24:00 AM
Wow! Great poem! Congratulations!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/23/2021 8:40:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this Visit write. Did you say, Wow???? You just made my day. "Thank You" Have a blessed day writing away....................
Date: 11/22/2021 4:33:00 PM
Such a moving poem, Paula. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/23/2021 8:38:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my Visit write. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Date: 11/21/2021 4:39:00 AM
How wonderful to have such an aunt, and the memories of the past...Delice
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/21/2021 7:48:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Many wonderful memories from a wonderful aunt. Have a blessed day/week writing away....................
Date: 11/19/2021 5:48:00 AM
Such memories you have woven into a beautiful poem Paula! You have also evoked precious memories for me and I love your poem! Happy Friday!!!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2021 9:27:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love this write. Glad this has many wonderful memories for you. Great memories are the best. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away....................
Date: 11/18/2021 9:31:00 PM
Wow, Paula you take me back, being i was an only child, some of my aunts and uncles were like my brother and sisters. Love the poem, and yes those days have all gone, but again you take me back. Love it..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2021 9:25:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you love this "Visit" write. Glad this has many great memories about your wonderful aunts/uncles. Great memories are the best kind. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Date: 11/18/2021 5:40:00 PM
what a loss; but what a legacy. If we never have one relative like that, the Universe (and families) are churchmouse-poor. shalom shalom Dear Poet
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/19/2021 9:22:00 AM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Everyone needs great memories about a great aunt. I still miss her very much. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Date: 11/18/2021 10:00:00 AM
Dear Paula, what a beautiful memory, what an enriched life you had with such a special aunt. I too had an aunt that I adored and I miss her more each day. Blessings, Paulette
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2021 12:15:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like this "Visit" write. Many great memories about a great aunt. After all the year, I still miss her very much. Glad you were lucky to also have a great aunt. Have a blessed day writing away....................
Date: 11/17/2021 9:54:00 PM
Great memories of some lovely visits, Paula:)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/18/2021 12:13:00 PM
Thank You, for reading/writing. Glad you like my "Visit" write. Yes, many great memories. Have a blessed day writing away....................

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