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Visions of Grandeur

With visions of grandeur and a heart full of hopes, she ventured out into the big world; Without the necessities or learning the ropes - she was a wild-eyed and naïve little girl. She entered the city carefree and pure, with visions of grandeur and a heart full of hopes. Success was on the horizon; of that she was sure, before hunger and desperation started to grope. “Return to Sender” was written on the envelope, stuffed with unfulfilled expectations from her past; With visions of grandeur and a heart full of hopes, which she clung onto until the very last. Twenty years older and worn out in defeat, intoxicated by the alcohol that helps her to cope; She frowns at the young girl, new to the street with visions of grandeur and a heart full of hopes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/9/2013 3:37:00 PM
You "DUDE" it again Joe! WOW
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Date: 8/30/2013 4:02:00 PM
Joe a clever write well portrayed congrats on win Shadow x smile
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Date: 8/25/2013 12:47:00 AM
Joe, Congrats on winning 7th place win in my contest.
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Date: 8/24/2013 6:39:00 PM
oh my! what a tale, its a gem that can be made into a film, pls give me a small role! Congrats on yr win. Morgan
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Date: 8/24/2013 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win . Joyce
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Date: 8/24/2013 9:09:00 AM
good winning poem....SKAT
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