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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Mind travels amid the etheric realms as dreamscapes roll by on their journey. Dreamtime classrooms filled with spirits lend their flavors of harmony to the attentive soul... Stardust orbs absorb visions.

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Peter Dome

Date: 3/29/2024 5:03:00 PM

Speechless. Can I borrow your min d for a while?. Wonderful. I'm learning so much. Thank you for sharing.Pete.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/29/2024 5:36:00 PM

aww, thanks, Peter. I appreciate your enthusiasm for this poem. Maybe we could swap minds for a while...yours intrigues me...I'm learning from you as well. I'm always seeing new techniques and unique takes on life when reading someone else's poetry. Wishing you a pleasant weekend, Sara

Tonye George

Date: 3/29/2024 2:39:00 AM

"Stardust orbs absorb visions." Loved this one. Always love your imagery.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/29/2024 5:34:00 PM

thank you, Tonye. Such a great compliment to give a poet. Grateful you love my imagery!! Color me delighted. Have a pleasant weekend, Sara

Bill Baker

Date: 3/28/2024 5:31:00 PM

I like the flow of your Free Verse poetry, Sara. The image and poetry were vivid. A poet friend down the hall, Bill

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/29/2024 5:33:00 PM

you're words touched me, my fellow Bard and writing mate. Thanks for vising, hugs, Sara

Silent One

Date: 3/27/2024 1:53:00 PM

Deep cosmic and spiritual write dear Sara.. An excellent arrangement of words as always..

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/27/2024 6:23:00 PM

thanks for your visit and meaningful comments, Silent One. This was a unique poem that not everyone will appreciate. Glad you do :-) have a splendid evening, Sara

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 3/27/2024 10:21:00 AM

Beautiful Sara, every word and that last line is simply sensational… Beryl

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/27/2024 6:23:00 PM

aww, thank you Beryl. You're so thoughtful and kind. Grateful for you and all your support, hugs, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/27/2024 10:15:00 AM

An excellent poem with deep meaning. Love your diction.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/27/2024 6:22:00 PM

thank you for your meaningful comments, Victor...your words mean a great deal to me. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Mat Ignacio

Date: 3/27/2024 10:11:00 AM

beautifully composed - i agree with tom too about the final line

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/27/2024 6:22:00 PM

aww, thank you Mat. Appreciate your visit and kind words for this rather 'unique' poem. Have a pleasant evening, Sara

Tom Woody

Date: 3/27/2024 6:36:00 AM

Sounds like a Timothy Leary experience lol. That last line is brilliant though. "Stardust orbs absorb visions." Cool

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 3/27/2024 6:21:00 PM

hadn't thought about Timothy Leary in a long time, but I can see your point. Glad you thought the last line was brilliant. Means a lot to me, Enjoy your evening, Sara