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Poetry/Swap Quatrain/Vision Quest
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1651-787-09
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France 

Written, June 09, 2024
For the International Contest, Swap It
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich, Judged 06/30/2024

Second Place

A vision quest, to find my soul, with the great spirits I will stroll; all my secrets I have confessed, to find my soul ... a vision quest. The green woodlands, waiting for me, I find strength in each spirit tree; to heal I must journey badlands, waiting for me ... the green woodlands. I hear water, I hear birds swirl, oh, shine courage on this lost girl; falling softly the rainwater, I hear birds swirl ... I hear water. I am flying, on feathered wings, peacefulness in my soul now clings; and with sweet joy, I am crying, on feathered wings ... I am flying.

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Date: 7/2/2024 3:16:00 PM
Constance, this is SO lovely. CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Constance La France
Date: 7/3/2024 1:47:00 AM
Janice, thank you for the compliment and congrats, Constance
Date: 7/1/2024 9:23:00 AM
Constance, I imagined the vision quests I've seen depicted in movies and this was just a beautiful way to show it. Awesome poem, Dear Heart
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Date: 7/3/2024 1:47:00 AM
Andrea, thank you for the contest and my placement, and the compliment, Constance
Date: 6/10/2024 8:48:00 AM
Spruce up my wings and I sing, thanks for sharing your quest
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2024 4:46:00 PM
DM, thank you so much for the comment, hugs
Date: 6/10/2024 5:35:00 AM
Nice write stay in flight! :)
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Date: 6/10/2024 4:46:00 PM
John, thank you for the comment, hugs
Date: 6/10/2024 5:33:00 AM
Nice write stay in flight! :)
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Constance La France
Date: 6/10/2024 4:46:00 PM
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