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Viking Warrior of Woodland

When the sun hangs low by scarlet-threaded silk, you'll find my soul waltzing in the womb of woodland like a viking warrior, where I'm rooted ~ beyond decaying diamonds, as life unfolds a watercolor symphony falling from the canopy of chrysanthemums, and I am more than those soft-blooded sins, surfing across satanic stars, still aching to be cherished by azure-butterfly auroras ~ where the angels shed their skin. Hear me in the heathers of a hummingbird, as it tiptoes and leaves lilac footprints upon the origami-thin crescent, unfolding ambrosial sonatas upon honey-kissed keys of paradise... Feel me floating as the last filament of dust, consumed by remorseful rust ~ where my wings have been forsaken by featherless birds of the peacock moon, and I am torn between, those celestial scents within citrus love, which choreograph a divine lust for peace... Sense me in embellished elixirs, where the custard clemency of cessation melts every feral twilight ~ and scribbles savannah hues of tangerine rhapsody throbbing in the hearts of those, misunderstood by time... I refuse to be enslaved as a liquefied lace of lovelorn lavenders, within a mannequin, whose marble flakes have lost their mirth ~ for these beasty fragrances, trapped in wild roses, will forever shield my cinnamon stardust, from slipping away in a space without sunflowers. Search for me midst milky ferns, blossoming in skylines ~ where astronomy flows in the veins of asters, which have always been an armour for my intuitions, a pulse for my psyche, a chariot for my crestfallen conscience and a whiskey-gold glare for my grieving faith, f l u t t e r i n g like wrinkled violets in velvet verses... So, when the florets of 's'aimer soi-même' unleash from sepals of scrutiny and sing a forlorn hymn to the reborn trust, twirling in tributaries of tomorrows ~ I will engrave my magnolia manifestations and blossom as a four-leaf clover across fairy wisps of tulip-knitted horizons... " I am free as those sailors, spiralling in sunsets ~ between riverbanks that separate sorrow from sparkling cocktails, for, I'm nevermore betrothed to the devil of darkness and those murky mosaics of mimosas don't just remember me, as a maleficent mistress of metaphors, breathing in metallic misery..."

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Date: 10/8/2024 5:29:00 AM
Hiya, sounds like a very positive description of a free spirit. That is a wonderful thing to have and do. Smiles and blessings for the elegance of your presence...amazing the way your poetry mimics a free spirit with such images. Your poems float here and express a very kind outlook.
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Date: 10/7/2024 2:51:00 PM
blossom as a four-leaf clover, I can see a field filled with them, and they belong all to you my dear, inhale the aroma of success, its all in your favor love
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Date: 10/7/2024 8:45:00 AM
Dear Hiya, What is not to like? You have reflected nature and mythology, which are several of my loves. And what a splendid job blending Norse elements with lush forest scenes, creating a unique atmosphere. Of course, a lot of great things can be said about your alliterations and metaphors, which I found to be very striking.Your dreamlike narrative has captivated my imagination. Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 10/7/2024 7:09:00 AM
Excellent, congratulations
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Date: 10/7/2024 6:25:00 AM
" I am free as those sailors, spiralling in sunsets ~ such a beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/6/2024 5:23:00 PM
This fascinating poem embodies strength and freedom. It's a very enjoyable read.
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Date: 10/6/2024 1:07:00 PM
"and I am more than those soft-blooded sins, surfing across satanic stars," -- love that. "Search for me midst milky ferns, blossoming in skylines ~ where astronomy flows in the veins of asters," -- incredibly good! "I'm nevermore betrothed to the devil of darkness and those murky mosaics of mimosas don't just remember me, as a maleficent mistress of metaphors, breathing in metallic misery..." -- freedom a metaphor away for all of us, brave enough to dare the woods naked of primal crutches 'neath a canopy of beckoning stars.
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Date: 10/6/2024 10:33:00 AM
Hey Hiya... Your poem feels like an ethereal dance between nature and the cosmos, blending earthy imagery with celestial wonder in a way that captivates the imagination. The opening, "When the sun hangs low by scarlet-threaded silk," immediately sets a tone of delicate beauty and mysticism. From there, you guide the reader into a world where the soul "waltzes in the womb of woodland," which creates a powerful sense of rootedness, while simultaneously reaching for the heavens.
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Date: 10/6/2024 8:54:00 AM
Unbelievably good poetry! I am in awe...I Iove the descriptive language you've used to perfection! The alliteration are imaginative and rhythmic bringing this writing to life! Xoxo
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