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Victoria

~The beauty of the flesh, the exotic Moluccas dream the source of excellence, in the clash the lust of the eyes, the flesh, and pride of life peace of angel wings be in love’s reflection the glory of vanity in strands of auburn hair. ~Grace of femininity in Victoria’s form light rays reveal, her mind gazes with pulsating intent as waters of life’s reflections teem vibrant the silence of eloquence stored in the center of stillness. ~Multi colors pulsating with energetic heavenly bliss as time immemorial immersed as liquid form instills sweet smells of fragrant blooms mix with soft white light births nature’s finest reflection, it's illusions in water of the reality of the forms of love dimensions above. ~For what of the beauty of this female’s dream but powered directions of godly cosmic thought thus channeled potential into forms of beauty as dimensions appeared for young maiden’s inspection. ~Intelligent life inspects and enjoys the beauty fashioned for beauty’s enjoyment in Victoria’s dream contemplate the graceful beauty of feminine flesh blends into nature of love’s kiss. By john Moses Freeman For and in honor of Constance La France ~ Ramblin Poet~ And contest: Reflections

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Date: 3/3/2011 2:15:00 PM
Another beautiful write and congratulations on another fine win for this deserving poem, John. Love, Annalise
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Date: 3/2/2011 12:09:00 PM
Congratulations John on your fine win in Constance's wonderful contest....:)
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Date: 3/1/2011 1:44:00 PM
a belated congratulations on your beautiful victoria, john!
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Date: 2/28/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win John in Constance's contest "Reflection". Love, Carol
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Date: 2/27/2011 1:27:00 PM
Hey John, congratulations on your win it the contest :) hope your day is a blessed one
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Date: 2/26/2011 4:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 2/26/2011 11:17:00 AM
Congrats Moses on your wonderful win in the Reflections contest ..another superb entry luv.. so happy to be sharing the winners list with a great friend....
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Date: 2/26/2011 6:28:00 AM
Congrats John on your win with this lovely poem..BG
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Date: 2/25/2011 11:20:00 PM
great result today John best of wishes to you.
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Date: 2/25/2011 8:11:00 PM
Your Vuctoria is lovely. Many congratulations for this big win.
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Date: 2/25/2011 7:48:00 PM
Congrats john on your well deserved win in the contest of Constance with this beautiful write!---kashinath
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's contest with this fine entry. I liked this the first time I read it.
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:38:00 PM
ohh, john... i wish you booming applause for this win! :) huggs,nette
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Date: 2/25/2011 6:00:00 PM
Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Constance, john
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:31:00 PM
It's clear that you put a lot of thought AND "reflection" into this fine piece of poetry, john. Best wishes in the contest. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/22/2011 11:06:00 AM
So wonderfully penned as only you can write, John. I like the way Victoria is empowered by "directions of Godly cosmic thought. This should be a goal for all of us. Wishing you success in the contest, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/22/2011 10:42:00 AM
This looks like a formidable entry for Constance's contest. You have great descriptiveness throughout this work.
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Date: 2/22/2011 8:45:00 AM
Good luck in the contest with this very creative, descriptive and expressive work..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work your kind review is appreciated..Sara
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Date: 2/21/2011 8:56:00 AM
engaging the reader to journey with the might and power of your victoria! amazing.. best of luck, john.. just finished mine for this contest as well.. :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:51:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Date: 2/21/2011 6:43:00 AM
love this John, the silence of eloquence line is brilliant, good luck in contest. Harry
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