Vicious Haunts of the Dead

Ghastly sights on the day of the dead frighten me, Zombie ghouls from the grave will arise from afar With a howl and a scream sodden ghost running free Come the fear of dying ‘neath the moon and the star. On a cold October autumn night keeping watch, Lest the hand of the witch grab my leg, drag me down From the rags of my shirt, a demon takes a swatch I do fear nasty grins of the mime-painted clown. Vicious haunts of the dead still doth lurk in shadows Like the pall of one corpse from the hole ever near, The poor soul freely hangs from old wooden gallows While I flee like a thief in the night out of fear. From the depth of my grief here on earth, you hear it, The deep sighs of my past are still here in spirit.
Written October 17, 2022 [an English-style Sonnet 14 lines of 12 syllables each] Submitted to "All Hallows' Evening" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish POEM OF THE DAY Poetry Soup October 19, 2022
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Horsman Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 6:30 PM
Wow, You have me thinking of 'Michael Jackson's Thriller' here Milt. An absolute stand alone gem, worthy of POTD. Harry
Hankins Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 7:59 PM
Thanks so much, harry. I was thrilled that it was selected for P.O.T.D., and, if I may toot my own horn, thought it was the epitome of what the contest was asking for, but, alas, you win some and you lose some. No placement. Oh, well...maybe better luck next time. Thanks, harry.
Flood Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 3:11 AM
Note to self…. Check POTD more often. Sorry to have missed your ‘big day’ with this Spooooooooky tale, Milt. I’m sure there’s a podium position with your name on it. Belated congrats on your POTD. Terry
Hankins Avatar
October 25, 2022 at 7:51 AM
Aw, no problem, Terry. Thanks so much.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:13 AM
Congratulations on POTD Hank! Well deserved! Lovely!
Hankins Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:44 AM
Thanks so much, Caren.
Messina Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 4:02 PM
Sorry I missed this...so well written, Milt. Belated Congrats on POTD as well. Way to go...
Hankins Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Thanks, Charlie. No problem!
La France Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Milt, a creepy write, well done and congratulations on receiving the POEM OF THE DAY honor, blessings
Hankins Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, Constance.
Nicole Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:20 PM
A scary sight indeed, those "nasty grins of the mime-painted clown." Halloween is just around the corner, and your thoughts certainly bring a chill. This is creepy and creative. Congratulations Milton, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 7:38 PM
Thank you so much, Brandy. It is good to hear from you.
Tor Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:22 PM
Milton back to Congratulate you on this scary Poetic marvel for Craig's contest on Halloween. Your entry has won already, and it definitely deserves POTD. Your creative thought in writing this entry reflects your Poetry talent my friend. Again Congratulations...
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 7:39 PM
Aw, thanks, Michael. All of this is super nice for you to say.
Gorelick Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 3:39 PM
Congratulations on POTD Milt! How cinematic, it makes me feel like I'm a kid again watching spooky movies all night Jeepers Creepers. Robert
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:07 PM
Thanks so much, Robert. Gee, I don't know. Is there something I should know that I've missed???
Mccann Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 3:34 PM
That "scream sodden ghost" sent shivers down my spine! I don't know what happened to October either. I spent all last week dating things Nov which included a couple of checks! Hello, world, are you still there? Elizabeth
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:09 PM
I think he was referring to a big bad mistake I made in the poem. Originally, it was "November winter night" which didn't work with Hallowed Eve, so I edited it to "October autumn." I hope I wasn't too late!
May Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 1:56 PM
A ghastly and ghostly Halloween scene, Congrats on POTD Milton
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph. I appreciate it.
Anaya Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 12:08 PM
Another great poem of yours, flawlessly written and perfect form, I'm sure! Congratulations on your POTD L Milt!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 12:54 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya. I appreciate your thoughts.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 11:35 AM
Hello Milton, a great poem for Halloween. Congrads on POTD. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 20, 2022 at 11:19 AM
Hello Milton, you are welcome. Enjoy your day my friend.
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 11:59 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughts, Darlene.
Slaughter Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 11:03 AM
Pretty spooky, L M. One question, though...how does November fit in here? Congrats on POTD and BOL in the contest.
Slaughter Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 1:44 PM
So...poets are human, too...Glad I could help, L M.
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 12:03 PM
Thanks, Jim. My bad! An oversight I totally missed. I have edited the poem to be "October autumn" instead of "November winter." I hope I am not too late with the edit. I really appreciate your pointing this out. Apparently you are the only one to notice it thus far.
Lawless Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 7:25 AM
YIKES!!!!....RUN MILTON.....RUN... That final couplet sums it all up....the wreckage of our pasts......forever haunting us.....
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Thanks, John. I hope it does well in the contest.
Fowler Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 7:08 AM
oooh...chilling Milt. Written with fear and suspense. Perfect - congratulations on the honor of POTD!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Thank you, Linda.
Hinshaw Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Congrats ,Milton! A sure winner for the contest! Bob H
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Thank you so much, Robert.
Pandit Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:11 AM
BIG congrats, Milton, on POTD. Vicious haunts of the dead drive the effect you intended in this poem, aptly crafted for the season. Enjoy your day.
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:13 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay.
Kyser Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 6:10 AM
Congrats on the POTD, Milt. I'm enjoying this anapestic tetrameter - kinda fun to incorporate - easy to read out loud and find the rough spots. Maybe I'll get one in soon.
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Thank you, Jeff. I know you can do one well.
Seeker Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 5:48 AM
Great montage for a horror film! Congrats on POTD, Milt
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Thanks, Unseeking Seeker. I appreciate it.
Baker Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 5:38 AM
Great title and well written scary sonnet, my friend. Congratulations on your POTD, Milt. Those are some scary fears. Bill Enjoy your special day!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Thanks so much, Bill.
Logan Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 5:29 AM
Those things that go bump in the night scare me, too! Congratulations on your lines being recognized as POTD, Milt.
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Thank you so much, Jenna. Your congrats mean a lot to me.
Gentile Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 4:39 AM
Milt, chills galore taunt me as each line unfolds here! What a terrific Halloween Sonnet!! The last two lines are especially awesome!!! Congratulations on its selection as POTD!!! Enjoy your day!!!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Thanks so much, Mike. I hope you are having a terrific week.
Kitchin Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 3:06 AM
Milt, congratulations on POTD with your spooky poem!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Thank you, Tania.
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October 19, 2022 at 2:32 AM
A spooktacular POTD, but it rolls so well over the spirits of the dead with dread, a great one for Halloween, with I think a little non fairytale ending, congratulations Milton on your deserved accolade today, cheers David
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thank you, David. Cheers to you, too.
Alex Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 2:24 AM
Indeed, haunting, firghtening, ghost-filled, grave-filled grim scenes - beautifully penned. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 8:16 AM
Thanks, Chris. Good to hear from you.
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