Velvet Skies

Under velvet skies our bodies come together ~ ~ with stars as witness

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Robert Pettit

Date: 1/11/2011 9:09:00 PM

The wording of this nice senryu reminds me a bit of "Peaceful Easy Feeling" by the Eagles. Good output.

James Fraser

Date: 12/18/2010 2:44:00 PM

Dreamy and romantic Senyru >> James :)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 12/11/2010 5:14:00 PM

You should try your hand at a romance novel. Boy, this evokes an image and so compact, yet so evocative, my dear. Regards, Gerard.

David Smalling

Date: 12/9/2010 4:54:00 AM

Sensuous ... and those witnesses never die. One love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/7/2010 9:07:00 PM

Nice, sensuous write, Francine :) how awesome to have stars as your witness ;)-- nikko :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/7/2010 8:31:00 AM

You must be feeling romance in the air today, Francine. A stunning image in your lovely haiku! I like thinking of the stars as witnesses in the "velvet skies." Peace and holiday blessings, Carolyn

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/7/2010 6:31:00 AM

Beautiful warm write and sweet images...enjoyed my dear...luv Michael

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/6/2010 9:48:00 PM

it's sooo romantic here, francine!! ravishing senryu.. warmest, nette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/6/2010 9:38:00 PM

What a hot picture with words. Sensual.