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Vanessas Lip

Vanessa was the college campus beauty queen and she'd set her brown eyes on me We were both captivated at first sight two love birds as happy as could be Friend, Vanessa had a beautiful body just to look at her would make me high And my mind it was taking me places that were dangerous I can not deny By Thanksgiving I had bought the ring traveled to West Virginia to meet her mom Her dad had split when she was young it'd been years since they’d seen Tom I was so excited I almost wet my pants Vanessa and me were finally at her house This girl she looked like Heaven's angel in her sheer almost see through blouse Up the stairs we stood at the front door a final look and she winked with her lash Her mom came and she opened the door she stood there sporting a thick mustache Filled with pure panic that I couldn't hide I saw a coming hint above Vanessa's lip When they went into the kitchen for tea it was my chance and I gave them the slip ~Lyric Man Note: Just a little fun write that’s mostly true. Call me shallow, I know.. but a girls gonna look like her mom one day ;). I was young and scared. I fled from ole Vanessa and never looked back.(We were not actually engaged).

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/27/2018 3:49:00 PM
Enjoyed your story telling.
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Date: 8/25/2018 9:27:00 PM
Oh, you brat!, you scooted! A joy to read, and a great ending. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 8/22/2018 2:31:00 PM
!!! help!!! :D "I'd offered up a razor LOL = D James
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Date: 8/21/2018 6:42:00 PM
mostly true? hahaha. you dog you!! Thankfully people think my mom looks young for her age,so I am hoping I will be the same!! Sure enjoyed this one
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Date: 8/21/2018 5:34:00 AM
Lol..this was a surprise ending Lyric..it was a hairy situation to say the least
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Date: 8/18/2018 4:34:00 PM
Lol as the kids say Funny Lyric Man I like it Better safe than sorry my mate Razor Blades are hellishly expensive these days I wrote a poem called feather field of dreams. Can you or will you take the time to read it please I think this maybe the best poem I have ever wrote or probably ever will. Cheers Bud hope you are well keep on writing and singing
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Date: 8/17/2018 2:18:00 PM
LM Sooo you trashed the 'stache and did the 100 yard dash in 7.4..... That has to be a world record!
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:54:00 AM
You always have a way of capturing the reader in the first two lines, once I start reading your work, no matter what its length I must finish it---and always glad I did---Best of Luck my friend
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Date: 8/15/2018 9:43:00 PM
Lol. Okay, so Vanessa wasn't the right one. :) All I can say is- you have made me smile and giggle with this fun write. :) Brandy
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Date: 8/15/2018 4:42:00 PM
Poor Vanessa! Lol. Nice write LM..
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Date: 8/15/2018 8:49:00 AM
I wasn't sure where this was going but once it hit, it packed a punch. Great fun Lyric man. I really enjoyed it !!!
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Date: 8/14/2018 3:03:00 PM
this should be in your secret black book, naughty you, D...lol... charmed!..huggs
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Date: 8/14/2018 2:04:00 PM
A fun read LM.
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Date: 8/14/2018 12:13:00 PM
Hilarious ending, Lyric Man. I am dying here and I should not be, as I am sneaking a peek at work.
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Date: 8/14/2018 11:49:00 AM
A good giggle to start my day. :)
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Date: 8/14/2018 10:02:00 AM
Ha! You are right, doctor! The girl turns into her mother, just as the man turns into his father … Interestingly, I just saw the sister of my ex, and OMG! She was the image of her mother, only moreso. Chilling, believe me! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/14/2018 8:08:00 AM
Haha a narrow escape indeed Dave, loved it. Tom
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Date: 8/14/2018 8:02:00 AM
Hilarious I say, stroking my beard ;) you're too cute Lyric Man, xomo!
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Date: 8/14/2018 7:26:00 AM
Welcome back Lyric Man; even though U almostgave us the slip ... via the poem. Why would a hirsute mother-in-law be such a scary thing!? What's good on the gander, ought to shine bright on the Mother-in-Law- Goose, too. Blessings, as U have fun here. shalom, shalom
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