Van Gogh

The moon speaks in phases
the sun a voice of lasers
every cloud a picture story -- 
write me a day, and I’ll paint
you a Starry Night.
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Rodrigues Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 1:40 PM
Love those last two lines! and every cloud a picture story…I love clouds!
DiMino Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 3:11 PM
Quite a character he must of been to know. Blessings.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:43 PM
your words captures Van Gogh's work wonderfully. Nicely done, sir...have a blessed evening, Sara
DiMino Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:11 PM
This was one of the poems that sort of wrote itself -- went with the flow. So pleased you enjoyed the read. Blessings.
Dietrich Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 10:34 AM
So interesting how you presented Van Gogh here
DiMino Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:32 PM
It depends on totally new: words are words, same words...but how they are used can be unique in measurable ways; if a write promotes a new sense or sensation, feeling or depth, an alive modicum of tacit mystery, something enchanting or possessing, spiritually captivating for the reader or writer, then one is closer to original -- personally, that is why I do not strictly follow traditional forms, and do not use contest prompts -- wounder about often seeming aimless. I feel such rigidness interferes with any chance of my achieving original success. Can't say that I have ever achieved writing such a work other than to my own satisfaction? -- This is just me. Probably all wrong. But because I can't do something, has never stopped me from trying. Only attempting to give some insight into my own process. I am no professor or authority of any sort on poetry, obviously. I just write. I enjoy writing and reading the fine works of others.
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:29 PM
It is so hard to create something totally brand new these days. Is it really even possible, Joe?
DiMino Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 11:04 AM
My philosophy is, if one can't write it a bit differently, why bother writing it at all, no matter how pretty or motivational the work -- why repeat what others say beautifully? Creation is infinite -- why limit one's self, and one's God? When writing I throw out tons of publishable material, till a phrase pops onto paper, that has a hint of something original. Then I go with it. Let the Muse lead. Thank you, Andrea. Blessings.
George Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 5:34 AM
Here you have scripted a beautiful word painting. So pithy and beautiful... I really see the craftsmanship of Van Gogh.
DiMino Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 6:32 AM
Fortunate enough to have grown up in New York, where there are some wonderful museums, I got to study Van Gogh up-close. The one, though, that got me actually physically ill, was a portrait of a baby...? I think it was by Van Gogh -- but some others, like Starry Night, were transcending.
Rose  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:14 AM
write me a day, and I’ll paint you a Starry Night. Copyright © Joe Dimino | oh boy ! it doesn't get any better than that ! I think I'll have to steal from you again, poetic smarty pants !
DiMino Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 6:26 AM
Of course! By all means! You honor me. Can't wait to see what you create. Blessings my friend. Have a wonderful writing day!
Rose  Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:14 AM
I might use that for my next contest, as an opening line, if thats ok with you
Baker Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 6:22 PM
Excellent short poetry, Joe. I like the word play of Van Gogh / Starry Night. Thanks for sharing, Bill
DiMino Avatar
July 26, 2025 at 6:52 PM
Hi Bill; a fun write. Quite an artist! Thank you.
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