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Vampire Desire (Footle)

One bite So right My soul Control I feed Indeed Vampire Souls fire I bite Tonight Soul gone No con We need One seed For now I vow To bleed In deed Sorrow Furlough Tonight My sight Brings peace Release One goal Free soul Forth night Day light We die No lie

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Date: 10/26/2009 4:56:00 PM

Cecil, I wanted to drop by and add congratulations on your third place finish in the footle contest to my other comment. Enjoy your honor. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/26/2009 4:12:00 PM

Great poem. congratulations. Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/26/2009 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Cecil! This is an awesome write! Miss hearing from you. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/26/2009 6:36:00 AM

Great job, Cecil! Congratulations on your winning footles!!~ Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/26/2009 3:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Donna's contest Cecil. Love, Carol

Corinne Curcio

Date: 10/26/2009 3:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your footle win

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/26/2009 3:22:00 AM

Congratulation on your Win in Donnas' contest, Cecil! This is a wonderfully "frightful" Footle! Love, Robin

Donna Golden

Date: 10/25/2009 10:28:00 PM

Chilling, creepy footle, Cecil! Congratulations on your placing in the Footle Fright contest. Hugs, Donna

Kristy De La Keur Scoville

Date: 10/20/2009 10:25:00 PM

Definitely intersting and unique...Thanks so much for leaving me the comments....The Southern Belle

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2009 7:48:00 AM

A wondeful spin on vampires :) good luck in tghe contest and thanks for your comments as well :)

Kate W

Date: 10/18/2009 12:50:00 PM

best of luck in the contest............kate

Date: 10/14/2009 8:22:00 AM

Wow! This looks like it was a challenge to write. Clever title. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/12/2009 8:03:00 AM

Wow.....you went above and beyond with this fun footle!!! Great job, Cecil !! ~ love, Carrie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2009 6:29:00 AM

Wishing you the best in the contest Cecil. You left the rest of us without anything to say. Teasing. Love, Carol

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/12/2009 3:54:00 AM

You Sang ..... In Fang ..... The Stake .... Heartbreak !!! .... Great piece , Cecil .

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/11/2009 9:47:00 PM

I really enjoyed this footle :) your first line alone reeled me in--good luck in the contest! :)