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Vampire Bite - POTD

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"When someone shows you who they are, believe them the first time."
— Maya Angelou

"It is easier to forgive an enemy than to forgive a friend."
— William Blake

“If you reveal your secrets to the wind, you should not blame the wind for revealing them to the trees.”
— Kahlil Gibran

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A Sam Scott poem:
6th June 2025
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Come closer ears Come closer hearts I'll whisper as the lie departs My lips Will pout My eyes will scan The room surveyed as truthless Scam Devours with teeth Pointed and sharper Than gracious softness when truth Doth scarper The vampire bite Without reflection To veer your soul in wrong Direction Don't tell. It's just Twixt you and me No harm intended just.. Promise me This won't be shared I want the best To pass this reputation Test Is all I want In secret though No credit please or Angel glow You understand? Knowledge is power For all will know within The hour So here's the thing Fingers on lips For God forbid my conscience Slips Or slides around On muddy moral Holy ground With gasping tales that will Astound So bring that shell-like A little tighter.. So truth can be strangled - The little blighter We'll choke out justice Grab honesty's throat Thus fictional fabrication Promote And by the time the dawn arrives You'll be absolved of all the lies At least In part I must now leave you here My dear With your blackened heart's Redemption fear Before you blame me For deception.. Perhaps look closely For your own reflection (Mwahahaa)

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Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/6/2025 6:39:00 PM

Scott, the entire poem holds truth. This thought stood out to me, because many in the world are able ' to veer your soul (and mine) in wrong direction, if we allow them to. It's easy to point fingers at others, but sometimes we need to look deeply within ourselves as well. A powerful poem. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 9:32:00 PM

Ah Brandy, you truly capture the intended depth here and speak truth. There are those hidden among us who intentionally manipulate and cause us to deviate from the narrow way. Only if we entertain them. May truth always equip and protect you.. sincere blessings S:) x

I Am Anaya

Date: 6/6/2025 5:31:00 PM

I shall! Muahahah back to you. What a great vampire poem, an enjoyable read Sam. Congratulations on POTD! Brilliant

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 9:25:00 PM

Anaya, thank you my dear for dropping by. I receive your muahaha! Blessings and light and protection.. S:) x

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 6/6/2025 3:35:00 PM

Congratulations, Dear Sam. A hauntingly brilliant poem.

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:58:00 PM

Malabika.. thank you. Blessings to you S:) x

Anne Winter

Date: 6/6/2025 7:03:00 AM

Dear Sam, a witty and wonderfully genius write! The “(Mwahahaa)” at the end makes it even more genius. Congratulations on POTD! Best, Anne

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 7:54:00 AM

Hi praise Anne! I really am grateful for your words of effusive encouragement. Thank you kindly. Blessings, S:) x

John Lawless

Date: 6/6/2025 6:39:00 AM

"there's no one left but thee and me and we're not so sure of thee" (a line from ahold 70's political satire poem)... Nicely written Sam, I believe all who read it will feel the "bite"..

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 7:52:00 AM

Thanks John, I was hoping for some kind of Edgar Allan Poe vibe..not dissimilar to the recent Maria Williams creation (purely coincidentally). Must be something in the water. Blessings S:) x

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 6/6/2025 5:36:00 AM

Hello Sam, hauntingly brilliant POTD and hits so many raw nerves. I felt every secret and shadowed truth between your lines. You are making me question my own reflections and intentions. :). Congrats on POTD! Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 7:46:00 AM

Hi Daniel, great to hear from you! This is the response I wanted in many ways, as it is a poem, ultimately, of self-assessment. But who doesn't like a little twist in the tale? Blessings friend S:) x

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 6/6/2025 5:31:00 AM

Hi Sam. Love the imagery and pointed sharpness of this. A well-deserved POTD! Mwahahaa! :)

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 7:42:00 AM

Linda, so kind of you! Blessings S:) x

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/6/2025 3:38:00 AM

Sam, well penned, congratulations on POTD.

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 4:19:00 AM

Tania - thank you for your kindness. Blessings S:) x

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 6/6/2025 2:36:00 AM

A scary fright with a bite. Enjoyed the read Sam. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Beryl - nice to hear from you :) Blessings S:) x

Karen Jones

Date: 6/6/2025 2:12:00 AM

Chilling and thrilling! Congratulations on potd!

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:17:00 AM

Appreciated Karen - thanks for stopping by! Blessings S:) x

Maria Williams

Date: 6/6/2025 1:51:00 AM

Hi Sam, what a pleasant surprise, I came here to comment and found your brilliant poem got POTD. So well deserved Brilliantly unsettling. This poem reads like a velvet-gloved confession — soft in tone, sharp in bite. The conversational rhythm makes it eerily intimate, like a secret passed from shadow to shadow. I love how it blurs the line between victim and villain, turning the final mirror back on us. It’s satire, seduction, and self-reflection all in one chilling breath....Hugs

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:23:00 AM

As for the narration.. there is always something exhilerating in playing the villain, I hope I don't get too used to it! x

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:22:00 AM

Maria, it is always so wonderful to have such affirmation from you. I had so much fun with this and yet there is a serious tone, a warning maybe for us all to hang onto what is true, especially in a world where lies seem to be the commodity of choice - but anyway - your words do mean so very much. Thank you and as always deep Blessings to you and Ron for all your amazing poetic, creative, inspirational work S:) xx

Maria Williams
Date: 6/6/2025 1:53:00 AM

I love your narration as well. So good, congratulations again

Christina Bowring

Date: 6/6/2025 1:35:00 AM

Back to congratulate you dear Sam with POTD. Well deserved … enjoyed reading this again and the narration! Enjoy your celebratory day. Hugs and blessings xx :):)

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:24:00 AM

Thank you friend! S:) x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/6/2025 12:55:00 AM

- A bloodthirsty poem, Sam :) - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. ... enjoy :) - hugs

Sam Scott
Date: 6/6/2025 3:28:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, so lovely of you to say (I think! x). This was a departure for me and sometimes dark emotions and shadowy thoughts can produce a thing from another place.. Most poets can testify and there are many talented people on PS that inspire. Blessings to you S:) x

Christina Bowring

Date: 6/5/2025 3:05:00 PM

Wow Sam my friend … this one really bites! A different genre for you and it’s impactful! This latest poetic gem gives the wonderful opportunity to showcase not just your amazing writing talent but also your terrific vocal ability. Without a doubt one of the best vocals on Soup! So poetically well written and delivered to perfection. That laugh at the end made my curls stand up! The last stanza is profound. You should enter Tom’s contest which are always great. I’m faving this one! Mwahahaa!

Christina Bowring
Date: 6/6/2025 6:36:00 AM

Thank you so much Tommy my friend. That means a lot. You have all been missed too! Xx

Tom Woody
Date: 6/6/2025 5:07:00 AM

Nice to see you Chris. You're missed

Sam Scott
Date: 6/5/2025 3:16:00 PM

My dear Christina - so lovely to hear from you on Soup as always! As always too you are beyond generous with your affirmations, so I thank you deeply. Please pick up the pen and write again, we miss you on here, genuinely! Many blessings S:) xx

Christina Bowring
Date: 6/5/2025 3:05:00 PM

Blessings … and light to you! X :):)

Tom Woody

Date: 6/5/2025 2:34:00 PM

Pretty dark for you Sam. I like the humor reference at the end. Hey you should enter your best audio in the contest

Sam Scott
Date: 6/5/2025 2:43:00 PM

Ha..Tommy.. you are quick off the mark and correct as usual - I have gone rogue haven't I? Just needed to get something off my chest.. or neck, perhaps ;-) All the best to you and yes someone else has pointed me in the direction of your contest - I may imbibe. Blessings S:) x