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Valentine Dreams

Though Cupid was not on the scene the dame had her very own scheme. Her gent, she waylaid, her breasts, she displayed and cashed in on his Valentine dream.

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Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 1/29/2011 2:22:00 PM

Cupid would have been embarrassed? Fun and funny write, Debbie.:) I've beem reading some stark poems, this is one I'll leave the site with! Thank you..Mikki

The Situation

Date: 1/29/2011 5:24:00 AM

now that's how to use body language. T. S.

James Fraser

Date: 1/27/2011 2:06:00 PM

Many congrats Deborah on your fine win in Francine's contest with this terrific Limerick....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2011 9:27:00 AM

Congratulations Debbie on your win in Francines's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol

Elaine George

Date: 1/26/2011 3:49:00 PM

lol! Good one Deb. Congrat's on your big win. Lainie.

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/26/2011 8:00:00 AM

Hi Deborah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/26/2011 1:29:00 AM

No wonder Francine chose this one to rank among the winners. Fine write. Congratulations on winning.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2011 10:00:00 PM

I thought I'd see this one in the winning column. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/25/2011 9:42:00 PM

wow, how did I miss this one, Deb. Great meter and a sexy one too!! Congratulations to you! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Debbie

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/25/2011 6:35:00 PM

Wooo wooo ~~~!! Congrats to miss bawdy Debbie!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/25/2011 5:54:00 PM

Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Valentine Day contest with this unique entry .. enjoy your top spot ..luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/25/2011 5:48:00 PM

congrats on your second place win in my contest Debbie and thanks for your support

James Fraser

Date: 1/25/2011 1:35:00 PM

Just the way Limerick's should be, once released it's down to gravity. Koolio Limerick Deborah....^^....:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 9:20:00 AM

Thanks for the alert!!!!, Deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/25/2011 2:56:00 AM

It is amazing how a pair of breasts can make certain men forget about everything else around them ;) really enjoyed your limerick this afternoon, thanks for the laughs Deb

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/24/2011 8:59:00 PM

oh a bit naughty like limericks are to be. This one will do well in the contest. About my Eagle Dives. I am afraid that the eagle did die. Twice this month eagles have killed themselves by hitting our electric wires and I have lost my power for hours. But they lost their lives. Love. Joyce

James Peranteau

Date: 1/24/2011 4:09:00 PM

I must say dear poet; all in a days display ! Awesome write Debbie ! *smiles* ! much love, james

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/24/2011 3:49:00 PM

Very tricky way to cash in the valentine dream, Deb. First I smiled and then laughed,

Jancarl Campi

Date: 1/24/2011 2:23:00 PM

Hope you win with this one. Men can become so weak when viewing beautiful breasts. Thanks for making an old man sigh.Tkae care, Jancarl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 11:57:00 AM

Ah, he probably really appreciated having his dream come true, Deb. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2011 10:16:00 AM

soup mail

Elaine George

Date: 1/24/2011 6:14:00 AM

lol. Good one, Debbie. Lainie

Deb Wilson

Date: 1/24/2011 6:13:00 AM

yes those of the male persuasion do like to have these displayed! especially for Valentine's Day !! good luck ..love,Deb

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/24/2011 5:42:00 AM

good one Debbie. Love the way she cashed in on his dreams. All the best for the contest.