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Valentine Dreams

Though Cupid was not on the scene
the dame had her very own scheme.
Her gent, she waylaid,
her breasts, she displayed
and cashed in on his Valentine dream.

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Michelle Mac Donald

January 29, 2011 at 2:22 PM

Cupid would have been embarrassed? Fun and funny write, Debbie.:) I've beem reading some stark poems, this is one I'll leave the site with! Thank you..Mikki

The Situation

January 29, 2011 at 5:24 AM

now that's how to use body language. T. S.

James Fraser

January 27, 2011 at 2:06 PM

Many congrats Deborah on your fine win in Francine's contest with this terrific Limerick....:)

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 27, 2011 at 9:27 AM

Congratulations Debbie on your win in Francines's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol

Elaine George

January 26, 2011 at 3:49 PM

lol! Good one Deb. Congrat's on your big win. Lainie.

Kory Calhoun

January 26, 2011 at 8:00 AM

Hi Deborah - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC

Robert Pettit

January 26, 2011 at 1:29 AM

No wonder Francine chose this one to rank among the winners. Fine write. Congratulations on winning.

Joyce Johnson

January 25, 2011 at 10:00 PM

I thought I'd see this one in the winning column. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

January 25, 2011 at 9:42 PM

wow, how did I miss this one, Deb. Great meter and a sexy one too!! Congratulations to you! Luv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 25, 2011 at 7:09 PM

Congratulations on the second place win in the contest, Debbie

Carrie Richards

January 25, 2011 at 6:35 PM

Wooo wooo ~~~!! Congrats to miss bawdy Debbie!! :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 25, 2011 at 5:54 PM

Congrats Debbie on your super win in the Valentine Day contest with this unique entry .. enjoy your top spot ..luv..

Francine Roberts

January 25, 2011 at 5:48 PM

congrats on your second place win in my contest Debbie and thanks for your support

James Fraser

January 25, 2011 at 1:35 PM

Just the way Limerick's should be, once released it's down to gravity. Koolio Limerick Deborah....^^....:)

Dr.Ram Mehta

January 25, 2011 at 9:20 AM

Thanks for the alert!!!!, Deb

Wilma Neels

January 25, 2011 at 2:56 AM

It is amazing how a pair of breasts can make certain men forget about everything else around them ;) really enjoyed your limerick this afternoon, thanks for the laughs Deb

Joyce Johnson

January 24, 2011 at 8:59 PM

oh a bit naughty like limericks are to be. This one will do well in the contest. About my Eagle Dives. I am afraid that the eagle did die. Twice this month eagles have killed themselves by hitting our electric wires and I have lost my power for hours. But they lost their lives. Love. Joyce