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Vacation

2/16/2016 Here comes the Queen I mean Elizabeth sitting among prestige colleagues and staff The red carpet delicately cleaned every hour upon to relax The threads and mend the seem From the window I see this Big Wheel spinning around I am walking slowly keeping my feet on the ground I smell crumpets in the air Can I take them aboard or do I have to share Laughter fills my tummy yes full in fact I see from a distance Buckingham's Palace bricks they stack In such formation and clearly joined back to back Giving the states a run for their money but back on tour Here in this place I love to see for sure The wheel has stopped but never this day Where next will we journey Jack can't rip me off now I must stay Sherlock home alone but the guards hold me down Shh were walking pass some prominent people wow I am having a ball wish you could be here as this place gives definition It is not a dream but a touchy feel premonition I stand in the street for real and see how they drive on the opposite side Not causing ciaos not even famildihide can hide this much fun well I know you want to know more but my job here is done see ya lay'ah (see you later)

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Date: 2/20/2016 9:43:00 PM
Elisheba, Congratulations on your awesome "Vacation WIN!" LINDA
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Date: 2/20/2016 12:26:00 PM
Elisheba, Congrats on your placement in the contest...-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 2/20/2016 10:40:00 AM
Congrats well done x a beautiful poem well written xxxxx Wendy
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Date: 2/20/2016 8:41:00 AM
Thank you
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Date: 2/20/2016 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations for placing in the contest, Elisheba. Thank you for entering.
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