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It's your day Breathe deeply mend your wings Fire burst blooms splashing cracks speckled light Winter woes Spring is here bright revived.
Written: January 23, 2023 Tricube Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Sara Kendrick Tricube poem: 3 x 3 x 3 - 3 syllables per line - 3 stanzas

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Date: 1/31/2023 6:40:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem -
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Date: 1/30/2023 5:05:00 AM
A beautiful snapshot you have used as a springboard to write your Tricube which fills in the gaps. Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara
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Date: 1/29/2023 9:30:00 PM
Great advice on such a scene. Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/24/2023 6:18:00 AM
Well done in this new form my friend, I found inspiration in the opening lines. Best to you.
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Date: 1/24/2023 2:40:00 AM
- Wonderfully written, Las ... let the spring come :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 1/24/2023 2:38:00 AM
Perfect imagery and well done. Best for a win.
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Date: 1/23/2023 8:31:00 PM
Very joyful poem, and I love the image you shared! I can barely wait for spring.
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Date: 1/23/2023 7:29:00 PM
So vivid and evocative of spring's return, best wishes for the contest~
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Date: 1/23/2023 6:25:00 PM
Agree with harry's comment . A lovely poem in a lovely form. All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 1/23/2023 5:11:00 PM
Wow, love the form, and the theme, so positive, Lasaad. Harry
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