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my city is very conservative, a government city, with clean streets and parks, high rise buildings mingle with old, and there was a time, not long ago . . . when you would never see beggars, pleading on corners and, from doorways, old people, children, young people in desperation . . . this is a city of tourists and sites to see. pleading for help, money for food, (maybe booze or drugs), maybe not, their eyes beseeching, and full of pain . . . more and more each day it seems. there was a time when the citizens, of this fair city, would have been horrified, but nowadays most just walk by, without a thought . . . (mumbling something like freeloader.) really, like would anyone choose, to sit in the rain and snow, in the freezing cold, imploring a passerby for help, anything, even a kind word perhaps. the poverty and panhandling, is terrible now in my city center, people don't know what to do when they, see the penniless and needy . . . in a rich country this is a disgrace, the destitute are ignored, walk on by, dodge the outstretched hand, evade those eyes, sad but true in this society where many are one pay cheque away, from poverty themselves . . . in this upside down world. __________________________ February 27, 2017 Dramatic Monologue/Upside Down World Of Poverty Copyright Protected, ID 880638 Inspired by the contest, Upside Down World sponsor, John Hamilton Third Place

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Date: 4/10/2017 11:07:00 AM
Sad but true. Great poem on a serious subject. Congratulations BW! :-)
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Date: 3/14/2017 3:18:00 PM
This touched my heart, Constance. It's sad that this is happening more and more. Congrats on your win with this moving write! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/12/2017 6:30:00 PM
This powerful piece made me tear up because of its truth, Constance. Congrats on your win. Your poem reminds me so much of the song "Another Day in Paradise" by Bruce Hornsby! Janice
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Date: 3/13/2017 11:42:00 AM
Phil Collins did it, Hornsby did That's just the way it is... similar songs.
Date: 3/12/2017 5:59:00 PM
Really good write on this subject, Constance, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 3/2/2017 1:25:00 AM
Excellent. Great poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:55:00 PM
Ravi thanks for the excellent!
Date: 2/28/2017 2:52:00 PM
Very well done, B W, good luck in the contest.. Hugs
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:56:00 PM
Eve Thanks for the compliment!
Date: 2/28/2017 12:23:00 PM
I can't imagine feeling more helpless than having to rely on the charity of someone you just happen on to that's walking down the street. Even if it's for Booze or drugs, it's still desperation. They have no where else to turn and it kills me to see such circumstance. Good write BW...
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Constance La France
Date: 3/2/2017 6:59:00 PM
Charlie thanks for understanding this sad but true theme

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