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Upside Down World of Poverty

my city is very conservative,
a government city,
with clean streets and parks,
high rise buildings mingle with old,
and there was a time, not long ago . . . 

when you would never see beggars,
pleading on corners and,
from doorways,
old people, children, young people
in desperation . . . 
this is a city of tourists and sites to see.

pleading for help, money for food, 
(maybe booze or drugs),
maybe not,
their eyes beseeching,
and full of pain . . .  
more and more each day it seems.

there was a time when the citizens,
of this fair city,
would have been horrified,
but nowadays most just walk by,
without a thought . . .
(mumbling something like freeloader.)

really, like would anyone choose,
to sit in the rain and snow,
in the freezing cold,
imploring a passerby for help,
anything, even a kind word perhaps.

the poverty and panhandling,
is terrible now in my city center,
people don't know what to do when they,
see the penniless and needy . . . 

in a rich country this is a disgrace,
the destitute are ignored,
walk on by, dodge the outstretched hand,
evade those eyes,
sad but true in this society
where many are one pay cheque away,
from poverty themselves . . . 

in this upside down world.

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February 27, 2017

Dramatic Monologue/Upside Down World Of Poverty
Copyright Protected, ID 880638

Inspired by the contest, Upside Down World
sponsor, John Hamilton

Third Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Martin Avatar
April 10, 2017 at 11:07 AM
Sad but true. Great poem on a serious subject. Congratulations BW! :-)
Merryman Avatar
March 14, 2017 at 3:18 PM
This touched my heart, Constance. It's sad that this is happening more and more. Congrats on your win with this moving write! Blessings, Kim
Canerdy Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 6:30 PM
This powerful piece made me tear up because of its truth, Constance. Congrats on your win. Your poem reminds me so much of the song "Another Day in Paradise" by Bruce Hornsby! Janice
Hamilton Avatar
March 13, 2017 at 11:42 AM
Phil Collins did it, Hornsby did That's just the way it is... similar songs.
Hamilton Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Really good write on this subject, Constance, congrats on a fine win!
Sathasivam Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 1:25 AM
Excellent. Great poem. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
La France Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 6:55 PM
Ravi thanks for the excellent!
Roper Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 2:52 PM
Very well done, B W, good luck in the contest.. Hugs
La France Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 6:56 PM
Eve Thanks for the compliment!
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2017 at 12:23 PM
I can't imagine feeling more helpless than having to rely on the charity of someone you just happen on to that's walking down the street. Even if it's for Booze or drugs, it's still desperation. They have no where else to turn and it kills me to see such circumstance. Good write BW...
La France Avatar
March 2, 2017 at 6:59 PM
Charlie thanks for understanding this sad but true theme
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