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Upon Dying

Ohbard and Pell and to his student, Pell, Ohbard said: I told him I was dying he said you will need a coffin then I said, my friend I shall need many

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Date: 8/18/2024 8:19:00 PM
What an intriguing ending! Fun and creative read this is. Theres always a pinch of mystery in your poetic storytelling! Absolutely loved this! How youv delivered a very different take .. sending you light
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 8/19/2024 12:08:00 AM
Yes, the suggestion being of rebirth upon dying and repeat living, here Ohbard is aware of it, he is very wise, but the rest of us meander through life thinking it is our first time. Thanks for reading IE

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