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Upon a Bed of Petals

There placed on my bed from my wife so sweet Is a pile of rose petals so elite Gorgeous they are with a symbol of love Shaped like our small hearts, glories from above Their light fragrance filled up our entire room There’s not an inkling of impending doom This love that’s not crafted from a patent There's just happiness and joy are present The petals together represent time Each one is a year unified, aligned Now we are to lay on this bed of joy These petals for each of us to enjoy I pull you down with pure romance installed We then reach the height of passion enthralled
Entered into Gail Angel Doyle's "Upon A Bed Of Petals" contest 3/20/2013

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Date: 4/16/2013 1:43:00 PM
Congrats Russell on your wonderful win.~ A.O
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Date: 4/15/2013 10:30:00 PM
Congratulations Russell, lovely poem .....Seren
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Date: 4/15/2013 9:18:00 PM
Hello Russell, , congratulations with your beautiful and passionate poem. A very lovely winning poem in Gail's contest. take care * xox-PD
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Date: 4/14/2013 7:12:00 PM
Hot hot hot,! Nice one j
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Date: 4/14/2013 12:26:00 PM
well done Russell. lovely words.....Seren
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:54:00 AM
A beautiful write Russell and worthy win xx
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:21:00 AM
Beautiful Russell! Congratulations on your win in this contest. . . Samia
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Date: 4/14/2013 10:19:00 AM
Way to go Russell! Great job.
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Date: 3/31/2013 11:05:00 AM
Perfect story and, a sonnet the language of romance You really nailed this one. Good Luck in the competition. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/30/2013 8:13:00 PM
Oh wow.......a bed of petals.....how romantic!!!! This is a great entry for Gail's contest!!
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Date: 3/30/2013 5:42:00 PM
You said it Russell, gorgeous! I can't remember ever having my fiance romance me in such a way. Your a lovely man, and thank you for the comment on my poem. It really meant a lot to me. I was lost in words with my daughter. However I used all words of comfort through my comments... It truly does help. You are a precious and dear poet. God bless. ~LINDA
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Date: 3/30/2013 1:33:00 PM
ohhh myy !!! Such love flows from your pen with such sweetness !! Love, Love, love this !!!! Not a word out of place !! It just flows so well....ahhhh Very lucky lady !!
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Date: 3/30/2013 8:38:00 AM
Russell, so sweet and romantic poem. - No matter how it will be received in the contest, it's a winning poem in my eyes! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2013 7:12:00 AM
Beautiful write. Very romantic too. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
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