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whispers on the rails, a lone train fades into dusk~ memories depart, echoes of laughter linger, in the smoke, dreams drift away.

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Date: 6/21/2025 9:54:00 AM
Nice Tanka, Rose. I like the train picture to accent your poem. Tex
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Date: 6/21/2025 6:59:00 AM
Wow! Powerful!
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